Ba Ba Black Sheep

[ru_salki99]

Title: Ba Ba Black Sheep
Author: Ru_salki99
Rating: NC 17
Pairing: Mal/Jayne
Disclaimer: Firefly belongs to Joss
Summary: Written for steplianna for this years serenity_santa. Mal needs to feel what it's like to love and there's only one man for the job.

Comments

[sinstralpride]

Awwww... that was great. Jayne and Mal are just meant for each other it seems. I especially loved them playing in the creek in the sunshine, that was so sweet and adorable. *crosses fingers* I'm hoping for a sequel... >> *hints*

♥ Sin

[ru_salki99]

^__^

Thanks. Yeah, I like the thought of Jayne being able to bring out Mal's playful side. They're definitely meant to be together :)

[kojikohai]

That was really awesome.
And the poor, poor girls aboard, always having to shove the guys in the right direction, 'cause either they're thick or stubborn as mules or something like that ;)

I'm still grinning. Have been since the wooly sheep-part. I love the sheep-wool-metaphor! It's so fitting!

Thanks for the really great fic.

[ru_salki99]

thanks. I don't know where I got the sheep/wool metaphor from but I liked it anyways. Glad you enjoyed :)

[bookaddict43]

I like that Mal was the last to realise that Jayne was sly; poor obtuse thing! *pets him*

Zoe and Kaylee are great with their common-sense advice and it's interesting that even the whore notices the two dummies feelings.

I like the resolution too. I hope they stay together a long time...

[ru_salki99]

In my head, although they had their ups and downs they stayed together forever and ever and ever and ever and well... you get the picture :)

Glad you enjoyed it.

[deliriums_dream]

Wonderfully written, all kinds of warm fuzzies for Mal & Jayne...

Cute title & metaphor.

[ru_salki99]

thanks ^__^

[ru_salki99]

ha, yeah i suppose it's a bit deceiving. Glad you enjoyed it :)