The Long and Winding Road 34/?

Feb 03, 2011 09:29



Title: The Long and Winding Road

Pairing: Luke and Reid

Other characters: Henry and Noah.

Summary: This is a story about the courtship of Luke and Reid. This story is AU.

Disclaimer: These are not my characters. They all belong to ATWT and its parent company(ies). All mistakes are mine.

Rating: PG

Warning: There is a lot of Noah in this chapter! Sorry ( Read more... )

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sleeper6 February 3 2011, 18:00:56 UTC
Oh my gosh, NOAH!!! What the hell is wrong with him? And how dare he insult Luke about not having a career or being Reid's equal. Good riddance to him! And I'm so glad Reid told Noah (and Luke) how much he does appreciate everything that Luke does for him. That's a man who knows how to be grateful.

Finally, Noah can be out of their lives and let LuRe live on their own in peace and happiness.

Wonderful chapter! It was frustrating to read about Noah here but it's good that he's leaving.

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rtruffles February 3 2011, 18:33:23 UTC
Thanks for reading!

I know it's frustrating reading about Noah, and he was in most of this chapter (sorry) but I really wanted Luke and Reid to make it crystal clear that they were together and that Noah was definitely out.

I really felt that Luke and Noah were an unbalanced couple. With Noah always feeling superior and Luke always begging for acceptance. Where as Luke and Reid always seemed to treat each other with respect.

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marsabi February 3 2011, 18:11:30 UTC
Such a fun chapter! Noah really is delusional LOL He was also mean here -so no pity for him at all!
I love those last lines too! Great job!

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rtruffles February 3 2011, 18:35:44 UTC
Thanks!

Noah was mean here! I'm sure that he thought that he was just being honest and helpful!!! DELUSIONAL thy name is Noah!!

I'm glad that you liked the ending. I needed something sweet after all of the Noah!!!

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rtruffles February 3 2011, 18:37:27 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad that you liked that line! I struggled with it!

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chameleonen February 3 2011, 18:54:52 UTC
The duchebags Chris and Noah still amaze me in this story both so in denial.. But you really gets out the feeling that many of us has about both of them...

Thanks for a great story...

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rtruffles February 3 2011, 23:25:28 UTC
Thanks!

I really disliked Chris and Noah on the show. This is somewhat cathartic for me, so I'm happy if it is for you too!

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shadownyc February 3 2011, 19:23:35 UTC
Another great chapter! I look forward to seeing what happens at the party.

I like seeing strong Luke standing up for himself.

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rtruffles February 3 2011, 23:27:37 UTC
Thanks!!

I love strong Luke too. When I wrote the hotel chapter, where Reid kept telling Luke that he was the best boyfriend ever, it was partly so that Luke could be strong when he was dealing with Noah! I hope that makes sense!

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