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rtruffles

The Long and Winding Road 26/?

Dec 28, 2010 20:47

Title: The Long and Winding Road

Pairing: Luke and Reid

Other Characters: Noah and Henry

Summary: This is the story about the courtship of Luke and Reid

Rating: NC 17 for language and sexual content (don’t be afraid)

Disclaimer: These are not my characters. All belong to ATWT and its parent company(ies). All mistakes are mine.

( Chapter 26 )

lure my fic rated nc17

Comments 36

csigeekfan December 29 2010, 05:15:55 UTC

ROFL. That was awesome. Talk about idiot. I like how you wrote Henry here, too.

rtruffles December 29 2010, 05:47:39 UTC

Thanks!

I'm glad that you liked Henry in this. I always felt that Noah just never listened to Luke on the show. That seemed especially true at the end when Noah said that he would wait for Luke in California. UGH. So I wanted someone else to point out the obvious!

csigeekfan December 29 2010, 06:24:30 UTC

Noah's an idiot. There was an amazing level of immaturity on the show. I actually liked Luke and Noah together at first. But where Luke seemed to grow from every hardship and mistake, Noah grew more immature. Luke saw it. Noah never did.

traciamc December 29 2010, 05:31:42 UTC

Noah is pathetic and dumb as a rock. The bathroom sex in spite of him was awesome! Is he ever going to get it? Methinks not!

rtruffles December 29 2010, 05:54:12 UTC

Thanks for reading!

Noah is as dumb as a rock, but he is going to get it. I think that he just never listened to Luke.
I hope that you like the way that this all plays out. Noah will have an epiphany and realize the enormity of what he has lost.

traciamc December 29 2010, 06:14:24 UTC

Oh, I'm pretty sure I'll love the way it plays out. I love this story! And you're right about Noah not listening to Luke, especially at the end of the show. He kissed him (don't even get me started on THAT), and then said he'd wait for Luke. Ah...didn't he just tell you that you guys weren't right for each other? You think just because his boyfriend's dead that he's going to take you as the consolation prize? Idiot!

rtruffles December 29 2010, 06:20:52 UTC

I totally agree!!! I really hated that ending!! UGH. There will be no Noah and Luke kissing in this story!!!
The only way that it makes any sense to me that Noah would be waiting for Luke is that Luke's feelings were irrelevent to him. Noah is just so selfish that Luke is merely there to play a role that Noah has devised for him, which is why he was always trying to change, bully and belittle Luke. UGH!!

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murgy31 December 29 2010, 05:52:23 UTC

OMG!!!!!!! That was the best!!!! It was so Reid! Loved it!

rtruffles December 29 2010, 05:58:06 UTC

Thanks!

I really see Reid as being possessive and territorial of Luke. I totally think that he would mark Luke for Noah to see and that Luke would enjoy being marked!

I'm glad that this worked for you!

I love your icon!
Happy New Year to you!

sleeper6 December 29 2010, 06:39:14 UTC

Noah, Noah, Noah--I hope he's gone for good.

I'm so glad Luke is being honest with him; just hope Noah gets it through his head.

Bathroom sex? Um, yeah, that was hot.

And you used "Lukian"--love that you've coined that word. Fantastic chapter yet again.

rtruffles December 29 2010, 06:48:56 UTC

Thanks for reading!

I'm sorry to say that Noah is not yet gone for good.
Noah still doesn't get it! He will though, it's coming!
I'm glad that you liked the bathroom sex, I worried that it didn't really fit in once I started writing it, but I wanted to have that happen in front of Noah, and have him still not get it!
I was thinking of you when I used Lukian- it just seeme to fit. LOL

I'm so glad that you liked this one!

ladynomad915 December 29 2010, 08:00:13 UTC

OMG I love this chapter.

I really hate Noah he's so posesive and not all there. Getting on Luke for not being early for their dinner, dinner not date as Noah assumes.

I love that Reid came to Luke's aid and was being jealous.

That scene in the bathroom was hot.

Reid finally broke the kiss and bit down on Luke’s neck, hard as he came shooting ropes of come onto Luke’s torso. Reid knew that he was marking Luke. He needed to. He wanted to leave no doubt in Noah’s mind, as to whom Luke belonged.

Luke knew that Reid was marking him, and that knowledge propelled him into a mind blowing orgasm. The knowledge that Reid wanted people, especially Noah, to know that Luke was his, turned Luke on like nothing else.// I love this part of Reid marking Luke with a hickey as branding him that he was his. this part was terrific.

I love how concern Henry was for Luke and checking on him time to time. and was nice to warm up Reid's dinner.

great job honey

rtruffles December 29 2010, 21:12:25 UTC

Thank you for such a lovely comment!

Noah is just so self important! UGH!

I love jealous Reid, just love him! I really don't think that Reid would be threatened by Noah at all, rationally, but let's face it what he feels for Luke isn't logical, and that brings out the jealous. Yay!

I'm so glad that you liked the bathroom scene! I think that Reid marking Luke and Luke's reaction to it is a big part of their bond. Reid needs Luke to be his, and Luke needs to be cherished and valued. I hope that that comes across!

I'm glad that you liked Henry! I think that Luke just brings out people's need to care for him. (except Noah) He has such a raw vulnerability to him. I always just wanted to hug him!

Thanks again for reading!