The Long and Winding Road 23/?

Dec 14, 2010 21:47



Title: The Long and Winding Road

Pairing: Reid and Luke

Other characters: Emma, Lily, Holden, Natalie, Ethan, Faith and Noah

Summary: This is a story about the courtship of Luke and Reid. This is AU, there will be a train in this story but it’s not coming for Reid.

Disclaimer: These are not my characters. All mistakes are mine!

Rating G

A/N I wanted to ( Read more... )

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marsabi December 15 2010, 15:31:55 UTC
Love it! Emma kicking out Noah OMG! You did a great job handling so many people at the table too. Yay to Ethan! Faith was funny. And of course, it is good that Lily thawed. She needs to if she wants Luke to remain in her life...A good chapter !

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rtruffles December 15 2010, 18:46:54 UTC
Thanks!

I haven't written that many people in one scene before so thanks for saying that I handled it okay.

I hadn't originally planned to have Noah show up, but before I wrote it I thought that it would be funny to have Emma not let him in!

I wanted to have Lily won over to team LuRe for Luke's sake.

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jem_018 December 15 2010, 17:58:48 UTC
Loved this. ♥

OMG. Lily is actually coming around. *gasps*

Ethan is just too cute. :D

Emma! I adore her. I loved how she didn't let Noah in. Oh my... I was cackling while reading that. It was so amusing. :D

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rtruffles December 15 2010, 18:50:27 UTC
Thanks!

Lily is coming around!!

I'm really glad that you liked Ethan here!

I really like writing Emma so she'll be in upcoming chapters!

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rtruffles December 15 2010, 18:54:44 UTC
Thanks!

It was never 27. I have no idea how many chapters are left. LOL. I know how it's going to end, I'm just not sure how long it's going to take me to get there!

I was actually thinking about you when I had Emma refer to Noah as nobody important when she was asked who was at the door! I would have had her say Noahbodycares, but then Lily might have jumped up from the table and chased after him. LOL

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bubbafrogz December 15 2010, 22:35:01 UTC
Ouch, dist by Emma. And what are you going to say to, strong but sweet as can be, Emma. Love that Emma loves Reid, as it should be!

Love that Ethan and Nat took to Reid!!

Hopefully Lily will stay on Reid's side and not stand for Noah's schemes.

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rtruffles December 15 2010, 22:49:37 UTC
Thanks for reading!!

Emma does love Reid!!! In my head Emma loves to cook and Reid loves to eat it's a perfect relationship!

Lily has been forced to see the light. She is not my favourite character, but I do think that she truly wants Luke to be happy, and Reid and Luke = happy.

Noah not so much!

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nancygrew December 16 2010, 00:43:57 UTC
Great chapter. I love Emma being all cold towards Noah and him being completely thrown by it. Love that Ethan and Natalie are pro-Reid. Ethan's comparisons of the importance of neurosurgeons vs directors was very funny.

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rtruffles December 16 2010, 00:59:57 UTC
Thanks for reading!

I'm glad that you liked Emma being cold to Noah. I think that he would be completely thrown by it. Introspection never seemed to be his strength!

I'm glad that you liked the Ethan's comparisons of neurosurgeon's vs directors. That was fun to write.

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