Fic: Taste

[pinkhairedauror]

Title: Taste
Author: pinkhairedauror
Format & Word Count: Drabble, 100 words
Rating: R
Prompt: 25: Creep lyrics
When you were here before
Couldn't look you in the eye
You're just like an angel
Your skin makes me cry
You float like a feather
In a beautiful world
I wish I was special
You're so fucking special
Warning(s): Heavily implied sexual

Comments

beautiful!!!

[ext_87629]

I really like it...
It's a bit more like poetry
Or free verse.
People should write more stuff like this.
It transforms sex into something beautiful, which is the way it should be.
Great Work!!!!!!

Re: beautiful!!!

[pinkhairedauror]

Thank you very much! It was a little argument in my head whether to write a drabble or a short poem for this one, seems it leaked through a little.

I am glad, very glad you liked it; and yes... and I think that those two would have and appreciate that aspect of intimacy.

Thanks a bunch for reading and commenting!

[rainsoulx]

I'd relly like to be short, but I can't.
You was able to do it, and you wrote something so delicate and beautiful...
It remind me a bit to Impressionism: with a few brush's touches you perfectly convey the situation.
Great job!

[pinkhairedauror]

Thank you so very much!

I love Impressionism, and this comparison is veeery nice! I am very glad you liked :)