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Prompt 16- Bloody Vengeance

Mar 26, 2008 19:42

Title: Bloody Vengeance
Author: summoning_muse
Format & Word Count: Ficlet, 1266 words
Rating: PG13
Prompt: #16, lipstick/mirror
Warning: Angry Tonks. Abused mirrors.
Summary: She stares into the mirror of her childhood and sees the vestiges of her blood. ........ So, naturally, she attacks the bloody mirror with lipstick.
Author's Note: This is sort-of a sequel to ( Read more... )

prompt 16, summoningmuse

Comments 4

pinkhairedauror March 28 2008, 14:54:15 UTC

She wins!

... NICE work. Tonks is indeed occasionally five, I think.

I love how you took depressed!Tonks, added a bit of taunting, and a bit of anger, stirred with a lipstick and you got an upbeat fic! *admires your mad writing skills*

summoning_muse March 29 2008, 03:00:03 UTC

Well, I thought about it, and this is about.. a month and a half after he left her? So she's over the initial shock of it, and has moved onto anger and outrage- How DARE he leave me and for such a bloody STUPID reason as well!- but I think, as the months progress, it faded into a more... well, tiredness and more into "I don't care anymore, I just want him back."

But... I'm sick of writing depressed Tonks, I only ever seem to write her, so yes, Upbeat! Angry Tonks FTW!

Ahh, *blushes* my skills aren't mad. If they were mad, I could maybe understand this thing called 'grammar' I regularly butcher with run-on sentences. But I'll still grin like an idiot from that compliment, TEE HEE. :).

grey_gazania March 28 2008, 15:34:52 UTC

I enjoyed this! I think you did a very good job of getting into Tonks' head, and the ending was perfect.

(Here via the hogwarts_today rec list.)

summoning_muse March 29 2008, 03:01:41 UTC

Thank you! I love getting into Tonks's head, so it's very easy for me and I do it regularly.

AAHHH, I WAS RECED? OH MY GOD, WHO RECED ME? O_0 *Didn't even KNOW about hogwarts_today* I mean, that rec has Fernwithy, my fav author ever on it! I don't even deserve to be anywhere near her on a list!

AHHHHHH!

*Runs around like a chicken with it's head chopped off*