I've read all of this, and it was amazing. *applauds* You've covered R/T so perfectly, every stage! My favourite part to read was her pregnancy and everything after that, with the addition of the third step and the baby leading them. The dance metaphor works really well somehow. All of it is good rally. This was so romantic in parts (the beginning) and funny in others (Remus nearly giving himself an aneurism) and the ending was so sad, especially since up to that point you wrote Teddy as this adorable, giggling baby. Anyway, this review is long even if it isn't enough. Thank you for writing this. I loved it.
Thank you! *Blushes* Glad you liked the pregnancy since it took up more than half the fic *Rolls eyes*. Ya, it decided it wanted to be center attention, lol. And I'm glad the dance metaphor worked, because THAT also got carried away with itself, drastically, lol. Well, and I think I might have copied it unconsciously from a fic I read for the Winter Advent at metamorfic_moon *hits head* Oh, well.
Ya, when editing this yesterday I was pissed off and basically like LET THIS END, LET ME GET TO THE END, LET THIS END- and I got to the end and I went- no! No! Don't let it end! Write more! DON'T KILL THEM! And then I nearly cried. Which is odd, heh.
Oh, don't worry about your comment being long, the fic was longer :P. Really, though, I'm flattered you liked it so much, since there's a good bit of my blood and sweat and tears in it, so... ya I'm flattered :). *Gives you LOTS of Easter chocolate*
Hi, I don't know if you're checking this any more, but I'm recommending R/T fics for a comm called crack_broom this month and this one popped into my head as a great one. Do I have your permission to rec it?
.... Okay that just made my day. Alot. No I haven't checked here in awhile but now I want to again. And heck now I'm inspired to write R/T again and that's always a goo thing :).
Thank you! *Flattered, gah* Ya, as much as I hate the stupid ending, I have to write it that way- the AU's bug me for some reason, because by my logic, if we leave out ONE part of canon, how can we accept the rest? If we don't accept that they died, what stops Sirius as being Remus's true love after all? *Snickers at the S/Rers* I dunno, that's my take on it.
But thank you! Gah. I'm happy you like this, and odd as this sounds, happy it made you sad. I'm getting better at writing angst, *cackles insanely* Ok. I'm done, heh. Happy Easter btw! :)
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Anyway, this review is long even if it isn't enough. Thank you for writing this. I loved it.
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Ya, when editing this yesterday I was pissed off and basically like LET THIS END, LET ME GET TO THE END, LET THIS END- and I got to the end and I went- no! No! Don't let it end! Write more! DON'T KILL THEM! And then I nearly cried. Which is odd, heh.
Oh, don't worry about your comment being long, the fic was longer :P. Really, though, I'm flattered you liked it so much, since there's a good bit of my blood and sweat and tears in it, so... ya I'm flattered :). *Gives you LOTS of Easter chocolate*
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.... Okay that just made my day. Alot. No I haven't checked here in awhile but now I want to again. And heck now I'm inspired to write R/T again and that's always a goo thing :).
Thank you! :D
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Really, a wonderful effort.
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But thank you! Gah. I'm happy you like this, and odd as this sounds, happy it made you sad. I'm getting better at writing angst, *cackles insanely* Ok. I'm done, heh. Happy Easter btw! :)
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