Ah, yes, it was your prompt! I see you're a Beatles fan. (I have friends who are obsessed...) I'm very pleased you liked it, and the connections of the two couples. I figure JKR intended that, so I built on it a bit. Thank you! :)
Ohhh lovely! I got goosebumps on two places (translated, there were two places at least where the emotional impact registered immediately and I had to de-tangle myself to realise what and how it worked so well!)
Fine work!
(eh, and don't worry about posting emo writing - Remus and Tonks had their share of trials and sadness that is well deserving some quality emotional writing!)
I'm sorry about posting emo because I'm not even emo myself, but I'm glad you're appreciating it. What were the two parts you liked most? Actually, never mind, I'm just pleased they had an emotional effect! Thank you!
I liked all of it! The two places I got goosebumps were ... Sirius not being able to come (and the implied trust among all three of them); and Though it's slightly impossible at this time, she still being pregnant, she would die for her child in a heartbeat. Oh yes.
That doesn't mean I liked the rest less. Just that those two were focal points for emotional impact that resonated with me right now :)
Aaaand ... well. I am coming to the conclusion that emo is written better when one is not emo; crack works out best when one's not feeling humorous at all... Or something. (hahaha that may be just ME being emo and knowing I'm writing too much emo. I try to alternate them though...)
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Fine work!
(eh, and don't worry about posting emo writing - Remus and Tonks had their share of trials and sadness that is well deserving some quality emotional writing!)
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I liked all of it! The two places I got goosebumps were ... Sirius not being able to come (and the implied trust among all three of them); and Though it's slightly impossible at this time, she still being pregnant, she would die for her child in a heartbeat.
Oh yes.
That doesn't mean I liked the rest less. Just that those two were focal points for emotional impact that resonated with me right now :)
Aaaand ... well. I am coming to the conclusion that emo is written better when one is not emo; crack works out best when one's not feeling humorous at all... Or something. (hahaha that may be just ME being emo and knowing I'm writing too much emo. I try to alternate them though...)
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