What a great last line. Remus understands his situation perfectly but thinks there is nothing to be done for it. I loved your descriptions of Remus' gauntness. Bill's comment was particuarly moving. I really appreciated the details pertaining to the way people viewed his new state, "with looks of surprise and horror". It really makes clear how drastic the change is.
This was a great little short. I enjoyed it very much. thanks.
Oh, I'm so happy you liked the last line! I wanted the shot to finish nicely. Thank you. I figure the Weasleys are a well-fed sort of family, so they'd notice something like skinniness...I'm glad you did! Thank you very much for your review.
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What a great last line. Remus understands his situation perfectly but thinks there is nothing to be done for it. I loved your descriptions of Remus' gauntness. Bill's comment was particuarly moving. I really appreciated the details pertaining to the way people viewed his new state, "with looks of surprise and horror". It really makes clear how drastic the change is.
This was a great little short. I enjoyed it very much. thanks.
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I figure the Weasleys are a well-fed sort of family, so they'd notice something like skinniness...I'm glad you did! Thank you very much for your review.
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