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Mar 10, 2008 17:04

Title: Tired
Author Merryb87
rating G
Word Count 177, drabble
Prompt 10, Awake
Warnings besides being un-beta'ed? Let me know if there are any horrific mistakes.
Summary Remus and Tonks wanted to get some sleep.
Notes This isn't my best work, but I like how it came out. Feedback is very much appreciated.

( Story behind the cut )

merryb87, prompt 10

Comments 18

bookish_brownie March 11 2008, 01:25:16 UTC

Aw, that was really sweet.

merryb87 March 11 2008, 01:28:12 UTC

Thank you! :)

pink_n_violent March 11 2008, 01:47:31 UTC

oh! now that was just precious. kudos.

merryb87 March 11 2008, 01:51:17 UTC

Thank you!

pink_n_violent March 11 2008, 01:54:35 UTC

i just adore you icon too. ringo was always my fave.

merryb87 March 11 2008, 03:21:28 UTC

Everyone loves Ringo! :-D

philotic_net March 11 2008, 02:52:40 UTC

I loved that last line. :) Remus and Tonks make such good parents! Sweet little story, nicely written. Thanks!

merryb87 March 11 2008, 03:17:40 UTC

Thank you so much!

shimotsuki March 11 2008, 04:14:29 UTC

I like what you did with the structure here, filling in more details in each paragraph until we finally learn why they aren't getting any sleep, and what it is they want even more. And it's a very sweet snapshot of happy new parents!

merryb87 March 11 2008, 04:47:06 UTC

Thank you so much! I was actually really nervous about posting this, since I kind of did it on whim, but I'm really happy that people are liking it!

pinkhairedauror March 11 2008, 07:23:08 UTC

*flails* This is absolutely ADORABLE! Remus + Tonks love Teddy = FTW!!

Awwww! lol I am still kind of... reacting! Short and strong, this was lovely!

merryb87 March 11 2008, 17:08:32 UTC

Thank you!