I like your take on the story and the issue with lycantrophy very much, the tension and fear Remus feels are described perfectly and you captured his character pretty well. It's only typically for Remus to continue worrying about the child, considering the hand he's been dealt.
I don't think he'd stop worrying easily. I'm so pleased you liked the characterisation, and the fears and stuff, thank you very much. I'm glad you liked the story.
I also like your idea. It's similar to one I had for a piece I'm working on for prompts 4 and 10. I think Remus must have been worried about Teddy being a werewolf even if the scenario was very unlikely. Nice job!
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Great job!
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