FIC: DANCE

[huffle_the_puff]

 Title: Dance
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Comments

[bookish_brownie]

Aw, that was cute. I really like this line: They stay standing there, in each other’s arms with gazes locked, for somewhere between ten seconds and three hours.

[huffle_the_puff]

I'm glad you liked it, that line went through around fifteen rewrites before I finally posted the fic, lol. Thanks for taking the time to comment! :D

[katyscarlett76]

I second the love of that line!

I really like how you've managed to convey so much in just a few words. I could really see the whole evening vividly and yet this is such a simple little fic. Well done!

[huffle_the_puff]

Thank you! :D I'm glad you like it. And that icon is brilliant, it made me smile.

[sugarannie]

I really like to imagine them dancing like this. And the last sentence is really sweet.
:-)

[huffle_the_puff]

Same here. I've always imagined Remus as being a good dancer (though it might have more to do with the gramophone thing he has in the film than anything else, lol). I'm glad you enjoyed, thanks for commenting :D.

[train_lindz]

Oh, this was adorable.

[huffle_the_puff]

^^ thank you for commenting! I'm glad you liked it.

[iamweebles]

This is very sweet and I like the bit about how he wishes he were sober (though I don't think he'd have danced with her if he was)

[huffle_the_puff]

Thank you x). And yes, I agree.