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Prompt Two: Enigma

Mar 01, 2008 22:56

Title: Enigma
Author: gijane7702
Format & Word Count: Ficlet/ 697 words
Rating: PG-13 (to be on the safe side)
Prompt: #2- picture of a woman with pink spiked hair (AKA Tonks)
Warning(s): Innuendo…perhaps?
Summary: When a question is asked, you should be prepared for its consequences.
Author's Note(s): So, I’m 2 for 2. (In my own defence, it’s my day ( Read more... )

gijane7702, prompt 2

Comments 15

merryb87 March 2 2008, 04:21:56 UTC

Lovely use of the prompt, yet again! It was a great little story and it's nice that we get to see some Tonks and Remus before they became TonksandRemus.

gijane7702 March 2 2008, 16:30:45 UTC

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed =)

I'm really enjoying writing Remus and Tonks and not RemusandTonks. Let's see what else I can come up with!

sspring92 March 2 2008, 04:26:07 UTC

Yay....I'm the 1st commenter (is that a word?) I don't think I've ever been that before! I really like the overall tone. No angst, full of life and color and energy, just like the early Tonks. I've always liked the idea that Tonks and Sirius would bond quickly. Even though there really isn't much exploration of that in the books. I guess she JKr was too involved with that Harry kid ;)

gijane7702 March 2 2008, 16:35:08 UTC

too involved with that Harry kid

ROTFLMAO!! Indeed, she was rather busy with him. He was chock full of teenaged angst in this book ;)

I'm a big fan of Sirius and Tonks being good friends quickly. I'm of the philosophy that he met her a few times as a child, whenever he could sneak it in, and she was very confused when he was chucked into Azkaban but quickly got over it as an adult =)

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed!

pinkhairedauror March 2 2008, 09:01:21 UTC

Better yet was the audible snap of their necks as they swung back around to look at me when Sirius called me Moony in return.

WIN!!

LOL I love the entire piece. I love it when Marauder!Remus is up and about, and this fic seems to hold a lot of him. Thank you for sharing it!! ^_^

gijane7702 March 2 2008, 16:37:05 UTC

Marauder!Remus is made of WIN!! I LOVE writing him =)

If I can find a good prompt I might elaborate on when the twins discover who exactly the Marauders were. You know it was hilarious!

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed!

sugarannie March 2 2008, 09:31:10 UTC

I really like this story; the interaction between everyone seems so natural, and the last sentence is just perfect.
#:-)

gijane7702 March 2 2008, 16:39:09 UTC

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed =)

I was aiming for a more...formal narrative that just got shot to hell when that one random thought crossed my narrator's mind.

I'm glad it worked ;)

huffle_the_puff March 2 2008, 10:51:44 UTC

Oh, I love it! It's nice to see something completely devoid of angst on my friends page.

gijane7702 March 2 2008, 16:41:46 UTC

Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed =)

Ah yes. I'm going for little to no angst, unless it's fluffy angst (flangst). I might try my had at a fic involving Harry and Teddy's relationship so it'll have to be canonically correct. Normally, I live in AU Land ;)

Otherwise, sit back and enjoy the fluff, humor, or smut!