Prompt Twenty-Nine: Spotless

Aug 28, 2007 20:53

Title: Spotless
Author: gijane7702
Format & Word Count: Short Fic//425
Rating: PG
Warning: Deathly Hallows spoilers//pregnancy instincts (nesting); humour; in-law interaction
Prompt: #29- picture of a spider web
Summary: “Funny place,” she said, “it’s a bit too clean, d’you know what I mean? Bit unnatural. Oh, this is better,” she added, as they ( Read more... )

august ficathon, gijane7702, prompt 29

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corellianjedi2 August 29 2007, 01:04:04 UTC
Haha! Love appearances by Marauder!Remus. :D

And I love the Teddy- Harry convo!

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gijane7702 August 29 2007, 01:08:15 UTC
Thanks for reading =)

Yes, my Remus and Andromeda have a special relationship. She brings out Marauder!Remus...it must be her Black genes ;)

O...M...G... @ the Teddy-Harry convo *headdesk*

Glad you enjoyed!

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molly_coddles August 29 2007, 01:07:38 UTC
Hm. I think you still have some digging to do, but I defer to nfwbls, who has more experience with the leveling system.

My favorite image here was Tonks with cobwebs in her hair. I bet she'd look like my rainbow feather duster...lol

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gijane7702 August 29 2007, 01:11:31 UTC
Thanks for reading!

Yes, will bow to the Queens of the Special Level of Hell But I'm quickly decending. I did, however, reserve tickets to the Tea Room already =)

I know...can't you picture Tonks in the kitchen with cobwebs all in her pink hair, her HUGE tummy protruding *SQUEE* cleaning up a storm! Poor Remus and Andi!

Glad you enjoyed.

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jessickuh August 29 2007, 01:32:30 UTC
He laughed at the lethal look that his mother-in-law levelled at him. “Those Black looks don’t work on me…I dealt with the best.”

I can imagine that, what with Sirius being one of his best friends.

I love friendly Andromeda!

You should write a full fic of a Teddy/Harry convo. That bit at the end was cute.

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gijane7702 August 29 2007, 01:53:02 UTC
Thanks for reading =)

Yes, I'm sure Remus knew how to handle Andi after Sirius. And I'm sure that's why they got along =)

*ponders* But if I write Godfather!Harry I'd have to admit what happened in DH. I'll think on it.

Glad you enjoyed!

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princesstopaz August 29 2007, 02:58:19 UTC
Oh this is funny, and particularly the little scene at the end with Harry and Teddy. But on the fic itself, I like the rapport between Andromeda and Remus. And Tonks cleaning, ha! :D

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gijane7702 August 29 2007, 03:21:21 UTC
Thanks for reading =)

Yea, I like the Harry-Teddy interaction to...but then I'd have to admit what happened in Dh, so...

I like a freindly Remus and Andi too! Nesting is a real pregnancy instint AND it does signify that labor and delivery are near. I think it's hysertical (but TOO adorable) that Tonks is cleaning though...she seemed to like the slob better than the clean in OotP. I was going to have her tell Remus she knows why she's doing it, but I decided to leave the fic Remus-Andi interaction

Glad you enjoyed.

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morrighangw August 29 2007, 06:58:17 UTC
Hahahahahaha.... I'd be pretty gobsmacked myself. XD

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gijane7702 August 29 2007, 21:14:03 UTC
Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed =)

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