Prompt 16 - Interval

Aug 16, 2007 23:49

Title: Intervals
Author: magic_at_mungos
Word Count: double drabble, 205
Rating: Gen
Prompt:16 - interlude
Warnings: none
Summary: The intervals makes the world seem nicer
Author's Notes: This is my first Remus/Tonks but when I saw the prompt this started brewing my head. When I get a bit more time, I might try and turn this into a proper fic.

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prompt 16, august ficathon

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jadeddiva August 16 2007, 23:12:04 UTC
I've been eager to see what you were going to write, and this is a lovely take on the prompt. It does work from a Remus/Sirius, Remus/Tonks angle, and I'd love to see what you could do with it if you made it longer. I think it's a great beginning.

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magic_at_mungos August 17 2007, 07:26:16 UTC
Thanks! I was nervous to hear what a Remus/Tonks shipper thought of this and I'm glad you like it!

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princesstopaz August 16 2007, 23:18:32 UTC
Frustratingly sweet, does that work? The opening line tells you it may not end well, yet you read on and come to believe that it will. Wonderful.

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magic_at_mungos August 17 2007, 07:27:03 UTC
Thank you!

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lady_tavington August 16 2007, 23:37:00 UTC
Nice, really, really nice! Really good take on the prompt. I like the thing with the crossword puzzle, how it was Remus who never seemed to finish them. I'd always thought it would be Remus to help Sirius or James finish them, but hee, I like your idea better.

This was really nice and sweet without being too sweet, really good work!

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magic_at_mungos August 17 2007, 07:28:21 UTC
Thank you! My!Remus is bright but tends to think in straightish lines whereas Sirius and James were the ones to think more outside the box.

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shimotsuki August 17 2007, 04:16:29 UTC
A nice sketch of a difficult relationship. I especially liked the bit about the crosswords (giving up when things start getting unconventional, eh, Remus?), and this: She refused to wonder if he was letting her see the whole of him.

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magic_at_mungos August 17 2007, 07:28:55 UTC
Thank you for your kind words!

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phe_o October 1 2007, 05:22:15 UTC
Awww on the ending there! Poor Tonks. Lovely little interludes here! :)

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magic_at_mungos October 1 2007, 07:41:03 UTC
Thank you!

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