Prompts 2, 3, 4 & 5

[princesstopaz]

Title: In Fortune's Favour
Author: princesstopaz
Format & Word Count: Fic, 1460
Rating: G
Prompt: 2, 3, 4, 5
Warning: None that I can think of.... Oh here's one, repetition of that old refrain, "Too poor, too old, too..." well, you know the rest.
Summary: Tonks and Lupin, as observed by others. Often done, I know, but I... er... couldn't come up with

Comments

[morrighangw]

Oooh.... Very nice. Sirius, Kreacher, and Mad-Eye - very interesting combination and you've managed to make it work. Their voices are very distinct, and you can definitely tell who's narrating.

[princesstopaz]

Thanks, I was worried Sirius might sound wierd, and Mad-Eye too. This is the first time I've written from their perspectives... not to mention Kreacher's.

[et13]

I loved the different points of view and I could tell who the new narrator was right from the very first sentences... Great job! =)

[princesstopaz]

Thanks. =D I really didn't make an attempt to hide them, did I?

[helsinkibaby]

Three very distinct and interesting points of view that work really well together. Interesting that you had Sirius wondering how Remus let himself get into this situation; most fics I've read have Sirius encouraging Remus, if not actively playing matchmaker. Mad-Eye's comments again tally perfectly with what we know of him, and Kreacher... oh you nailed Kreacher!

Great job!

[princesstopaz]

Thanks, but I have to admit that I meant for Sirius to be encouraging Remus too, and should have made that clearer. When he listed the problems, he was supposed to be mocking him.

[eternalylost]

I looooved it
Moody really made me laugh, simply because it was Moody.
and Kreacher was aaaaah so Kreacher

I wonder if that made any sense? =P

[sparkly_stuff]

OMG KREACHER. And Mad-Eye. Nice to see those points of view, and you did a great job. Awesome take on the prompt!!