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Aug 04, 2007 10:50


Title: Compass Rose

Author: Devonwood
Format and Word Count: Ficlet; 1,449

Rating: PG-13 (T)

Prompt(s): Prompt 2 (“There’s no such thing as a crowded battlefield. Battlefields are lonely places.” Alfred M. Gray), Prompt 3 (“Human Behaviour”, specifically “There’s no map to human behaviour… and a compass wouldn’t help at all.”)
Warning: Deathly Hallows ( Read more... )

devonwood, prompt 3, august ficathon, prompt 2

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jadeddiva August 4 2007, 15:21:58 UTC
Oh, I really liked this - the way that the two scenes interweave, the Map, everything. Yes, it's sad, but it's a nice sort of sadness where it's not just sad but it's sweet as well. I'm sorry, I obviously need more coffee but ...v. nice :)

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morrighangw August 4 2007, 15:23:30 UTC
Wow. This is so well done. My heart just sunk to my stomach at the very end... Darn you, JKR! *shakes fist*

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solo_chan August 4 2007, 18:49:20 UTC
After a minute or two of silence, Remus asked, “What about Dora?”

“What?” She looked confused.

“You know, for a nickname. Dora.”

That bit...made me cry. And the ending....cause...you know. It was just how he reacted, to her being there! ;____;

*love* great fic!

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pinktoasteroven August 5 2007, 02:47:56 UTC
I like the addition of a second map. I always wanted a bit more explanation of the magic behind its creation, and I hope Jo elaborates in the encyclopedia.

Good job.

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eternalylost August 5 2007, 05:30:20 UTC
Something awful fell in the pit of my stomach at the end of this =/

It was really nice.

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