Title: The Rivals
Author:
gilpin25Format & Word Count: Fic; 4254
Rating: R
Prompts: Prompt 21 - blue, and Prompt 27 - Toilet roll holder
Warning: Mild swearing, implied sex
Summary: It was too much thinking that had got them into this mess, so it was only right it got them out of it.
Author's Note: I hesitate to say yet another after-the-hospital-fic, but
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It's great to hear you enjoyed it so much. Thank you. :)
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My fav. part because I'm a pathetic romantic:
She looked at him. “But it’s a start, isn’t it?
His eyes were searching her face as though he was memorising a picture of this moment that would last forever, and he shook his head in wonderment and held her to him as if he would never let go of her again.
“Stay with me,” he said. “Always.”
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I'm also glad you think they meshed well, because I hoped it was coming across in that way.
Thank you very much for such a nice review.
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One of the advantages of doing it in a one-shot is that you can choose your starting point, and I wanted to start with Remus, as shattered and rocked as he is in the hospital scene, and trying to justify what had happened to himself as well as her. I think people can say all they like but in the end only you can see for yourself that you're wrong - even if it's wrong for the right reasons - and I liked the idea of him literally talking himself into the ground while she just listens, because she is already past this bit, it's him who has got to catch up with her.
I suppose the main idea behind it all was that these two were floating along on their cloud of lover's invincibility, nfwbls referred to the " ( ... )
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From nowhere came a momentary vision of a very old, thin wizard, with a long silver beard and hair, chuckling along with her, and then it was gone.
I really loved that bit, Gil! It was such a marvellous touch.
Bravo!
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*Ahem* I'll get off my soapbox now! Anyway, all that to say, thank you for such a lovely review. You know it's always appreciated. :)
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Thank you for the lovely review. It's much appreciated.
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