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Prompt 16 (Have Mercy)

Jan 16, 2007 20:46

Title: Have Mercy
Author: Devonwood
Format & Word Count: Drabble; 155
Rating: R/M
Prompt: Prompt 16 (mercy)
Warning: Smut
Summary: And so I beg him to please, have mercy...
Author's Note: Wrote some smut for my lovely beta,
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devonwood, prompt 16

Comments 12

gijane7702 January 17 2007, 03:31:18 UTC

YUMMY!!!

I love hot smut.

Nice take on the prompt =)

devonwood January 17 2007, 03:39:47 UTC

Mmm...who doesn't love smut. :)

The minute I sat down and mentally did an "outline" type thing, I realized that it was going to be tricky to combine 'mercy' and 'smut' without including a dominatrix AND/OR the line "You've been a bad boy! ;) *whipcrack*"

...I'm horrible, lol.

Thanks for the review!

gijane7702 January 17 2007, 03:41:24 UTC

*coughIthoughtaboutdoingadominatrixficcough*

devonwood January 17 2007, 03:45:56 UTC

LMAO!!!!!!!!! XDD

When I first turned on the computer, that's all I could think of. That, and a horrible fic in which Tonks dies gruesomely at the hands of Greyback whilst Remus watches (D:), so I totally scratched both of those and went with something different. ;)

lady_bracknell January 17 2007, 10:45:47 UTC

I really liked this - it's such a simple idea, but to do it justice in so few words can't ahve been easy. I really loved this line: With a sigh that starts in one mouth and ends in the other with a shuddering gasp,. I thought that really captured the intimacy of what they were doing, the connection, and it really brought the rest together, I thought.

devonwood January 21 2007, 00:12:44 UTC

But to do it justice in so few words can't have been easy

This piece kept trying to morph into a long and involved fic, and it took me the longest to cut it down. :)

Thank you for the lovely review! :D

jncar January 19 2007, 03:57:01 UTC

Very sexy. I like when writing can be sexy without being explicit, and you did a very good job woth that.

devonwood January 21 2007, 00:14:36 UTC

Thank you for the review. :)

I'm not into hardcore-smut, so I tried to make it as non explicit as possibly. :D

molly_coddles January 20 2007, 18:43:28 UTC

Oooh, steamy!
Well done. I like smut disguised as sophistication.

Excellent use of prompt! :)

devonwood January 21 2007, 00:15:33 UTC

I like smut disguised as sophistication

:D That's exactly what it is, lol.

Thanks for the lovely review! :)

trace_zbullet January 21 2007, 16:57:08 UTC

*clap clap* Hehe, just for little moi? XD *huggle* You rock! How come you can write stuff while distracted that takes me like 20 hours of concentration to dream of? :P

devonwood January 21 2007, 22:50:21 UTC

You kept complaining about my appalling lack of smut in The Matrix: Resurrection. XD :P

I didn't start writing while distracted. I sat down about ten minutes before American Idol, thought of a plot, and started typing. Then came the hard part; trying to focus on writing as my ears started to bleed. :D

Thanks for the review. :)