Prompt 9, Prompt 10

Jan 10, 2007 16:57


Title: Remus and the Tramp pt 1
Author: Devonwood
Format and Word Count: Ficlet; 577
Rating: Borderline PG/ PG-13 (K+/T)
Prompt: Prompt 9 (bump). Prompt 10 (Dolly Parton quote)
Warning: None.
Summary: Although he looked it, Remus Lupin was not that old. However, he was sure that this was the first time in history those words had ever been spoken without ( Read more... )

devonwood, prompt 9, prompt 10

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lady_bracknell January 10 2007, 22:18:04 UTC
LOL. This was absolutely priceless - the first line and the last were an absolute hoot, truly hilarious, and I loved the idea of Tonks going to so much effort - even brown roots - for her disguise.

I so want to see them on their mission dressed like this ;).

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devonwood January 10 2007, 22:34:58 UTC
- even brown roots -

Sadly, (well maybe not for me, but...), I modeled Tonks's "style" after several people I know. I didn't think of the roots at first, until I tried to think of every possible detail I could. The brown roots were a touch from my friend, who isn't a tramp, but that's beside the point. =D

I so want to see them on their mission dressed like this ;).

I'm itching to write that part, but I wasn't really in the fanfiction mood this afternoon. Life kept whisking me away. :)

Thanks very much for the review. Maybe I'll throw in a bit of Tramp!Remus for you. ;)

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ate_lavender January 10 2007, 22:27:12 UTC
I love it! Very well done!

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devonwood January 10 2007, 22:35:33 UTC
Thank you. :D

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shimotsuki January 10 2007, 22:30:38 UTC
Whee! I'm glad you're planning to continue this -- fun. I'd love to know what kind of mission requires these disguises -- could just be surveillance in a bad part of town, I suppose.

an outfit that reminded him of the girls who used to pull up their skirts before they entered his Defense Against The Dark Arts class -- That made me laugh out loud, because I can so imagine Remus's bemused and disbelieving reaction if that ever happened to him. (Lav-Lav, maybe?)

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devonwood January 10 2007, 22:37:58 UTC
I'd love to know what kind of mission requires these disguises

But a bum and a stripper....that really gets you wondering. ;) *gets all secretive* =P

I can so imagine Remus's bemused and disbelieving reaction if that ever happened to him.

"Excuse me, Miss Brown, but I do believe you are out of dress code.......!!! Wh- what are you doing with that tie!?"

And yes, I had Lavender in mind when writing that line. :D

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molly_coddles January 11 2007, 02:17:22 UTC
LOL, love that last line!
And I've got to wonder what kind of mission they're going on dressed like that...
Great fun :)

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devonwood January 11 2007, 02:54:21 UTC
Thank you for the review! :)

And I've got to wonder what kind of mission they're going on dressed like that...

A super-rad totally awesome one, of course! (aka: I've only come up with half of it. ;) )

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everknowledge January 11 2007, 13:45:40 UTC
That was cute. I have to agree, the first and last lines were great. I Can't wait to see the continuation of this.

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devonwood January 13 2007, 04:40:27 UTC
Thanks for the review! :) I'm not sure exactly when the next installment is going to come, actually. *lol*

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