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Prompt 7 and Prompt 8

Jan 08, 2007 18:00

Title: Broken Eggs, Broken Heart
Author: Devonwood
Format & Word Count: Ficlet, 812
Rating: PG-13, T
Prompt: Prompt 7 (Broken Eggs), Prompt 8 (Damien Rice lyrics)
Warning: Angst
Summary: It was funny if a first time Apparator did it. It was not funny if a twenty-four year old witch did it. Then, it was just sad.
Author's Note: Sequel to Past and Present, ( Read more... )

devonwood, prompt 8, prompt 7

Comments 11

gijane7702 January 8 2007, 23:24:17 UTC

Oh, God...poor Tonks!!

You capture her despair perfectly.

Fantastic job =)(er...not for her!)

Just one teeny thing I noticed: her flat nearly in site It would be sight.

devonwood January 8 2007, 23:30:08 UTC

*Edits* Thanks for catching that!

Thank you so much for the review! :D

I'm thinking about bringint the dog back in the future.....lol.

eshesh January 9 2007, 03:01:12 UTC

Poor Tonks AND poor dog.

About the egg/dark mark: My husband is the type who is able to see subliminal messages in every picture, whether they're meant to be there or not :) and he totally agrees with you.

devonwood January 9 2007, 03:20:01 UTC

My husband is the type who is able to see subliminal messages in every picture, whether they're meant to be there or not :) and he totally agrees with you.

I'm not sure whether to be relieved or not. XD

Thank you for the review! :)

shimotsuki January 10 2007, 15:28:11 UTC

Neat -- this is a really original way of showing Tonks's despair and frustration with her situation. I hope the dog does make another appearance. Will he and Tonks actually find some comfort in each other's company? And I wonder what Tonks would learn about "life" if that did happen. Some interesting ideas here!

devonwood January 10 2007, 20:42:30 UTC

Will he and Tonks actually find some comfort in each other's company?

I figure they'll be able to coexist peacefully. Possibly even start a relationship, if things move smoothly...

...Oh wait, are we still talking about the dog? ;) :D

Thank you for the lovely review. :)

jncar January 11 2007, 02:49:53 UTC

Nice. Some really interesting ideas. I particularly like that she is having trouble Apparating as well as morphing--I like the idea that all of her abilities are being affected.

And yes, poor dog! He seemed so much like Snuffles--it was really sad to see her taking out her anger on it.

devonwood January 13 2007, 04:42:35 UTC

I like the idea that all of her abilities are being affected.

I always thought more than her morphing would be affected, so I got a chance to use that.

Thank you for the wonderful review! :D

trace_zbullet January 15 2007, 20:43:34 UTC

...*shock* I read Dev's LJ...*runs off*

Oh, why oh why must all your fanfic be so sad? :'( :P

devonwood January 16 2007, 00:05:48 UTC

*gasp* You can read! *is impressed* :P

Oh, why oh why must all your fanfic be so sad?

It's not *all* sad. I normally write romance/humor. I really have no idea where this sudden flood of angst has come from. :D

Thanks for the review! :)

trace_zbullet January 16 2007, 03:16:29 UTC

hormones :P