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Pain-Prompt 6

Jan 07, 2007 20:22

Title: Pain
Author: Viki (no_sweeter_song)
Format & Word Count: Fic-495
Rating: PG-13 for adult situations
Prompt: 6-second tense
Warning: Incredible amounts of angst. Includes character death and cutting
Summary: Trying to find a way to deal with the numbness you're feeling, you result to pain.
Authur’s Notes: One of the darkest, most painful things I've ( Read more... )

no_sweeter_song, prompt 6

Comments 3

devonwood January 8 2007, 17:55:52 UTC

Ouch! I think my heart just collapsed. D:

Lovely use of the second person, and they amount of angst and sadness was deeply moving. :)

no_sweeter_song January 8 2007, 17:57:30 UTC

Yeeeeeah...it kind burned writing it, let me tell you. Also a subject matter I've never dealt with so... PHEW. Glad it worked out in the end. Thanks!!

molly_coddles January 10 2007, 23:53:40 UTC

oooh, ouch...
This really makes me cringe. Lots of good description that really, erm, hurts.

Good job!