Lost And Found- Prompt 6

[devonwood]

Title: Lost and Found
Author: Devonwood
Format & Word Count: Drabble; 203
Rating: PG-13/ T
Prompt: Prompt 6 (second person)
Warning: Character Death and Angst
Summary: You’ve lost her.
Author's Note: My first try at second-person (just like most here), and I think I have fallen in love with it already. This new icon took me longer to make than this

Comments

[godricgal]

Well now I'm feeling sad, too! The simplicity of this piece only increases the affect it has on the reader, I think. Because in the wake of grief, you do only consider the very simple fact that you have lost.

This is a really powerful piece, well done.

[devonwood]

Thank you for the lovely review. :)

My grandfather fell and broke his hip a few months back, and I remember how upset I was then, even knowing that he was going to be okay. I tried to tap into the emotion that Remus would feel after he finally realized that Tonks wasn't going to be okay. I have a feeling that it would shatter the rest of his broken soul. :(

[no_sweeter_song]

Ow, my heart!!

Aside from that, it was really nicely written. It flowed well, you really felt like a part of the piece, and did I mention you broke my heart?

[devonwood]

D: *tries to fix your heart* :P

Thank you for the lovely review! I nearly cried when I wrote it...:(

[molly_coddles]

Heartbreaking - but very well done. The regret is palpable. So very sad...

[devonwood]

I'm glad you liked it....maybe. Is crying a good thing, lol? (Hermione: Emotional range of a teaspoon!) :D

Thank you for the lovely review. :)

[iamweebles]

How very sad and lonely - it's a lot of emotion for just 200 words, but the spareness of it really works. Well done!

[devonwood]

Thank you for the lovely review! :) Poor Remus...

[jncar]

Ouch! That hurts! But it's great that you could put so much pain and sorrow into such a short, simple drabble.

Lovely job!

[devonwood]

Thank you for the review! :)