Comments | rt_challenge: Temptation (NC-17) by Helen

krystal_moon in rt_challenge

Temptation (NC-17) by Helen

Jan 03, 2007 09:17

EDIT: I have just read through it through my email as I recieved a comment and realised I made a few mistakes (I get confused over words very easily LOL) so I edited and fixed the mistakes I found.

Title: Temptation

Author: krystal_moon

Format & Word Count: Fic- 1,415 words

Rating: NC-17

Prompt: #3

Warning: heterosexual activity, cunnilingus, hand job,

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krystal_moon, prompt 3

Comments 6

lyra_lupin January 3 2007, 13:03:36 UTC

Whoa!

"hearing sounds of rapid breathing coming from the older man"

I love it when he tries to resist temptation and can't! Great writing of smut.

anonymous January 3 2007, 17:40:28 UTC

Very good smut!

devonwood January 3 2007, 20:47:45 UTC

0.0

Wow.

And....that's all I have to say about that. XD

kileaiya January 3 2007, 22:11:44 UTC

Um, well, yes. *fans self*

Lovely.

kerrymdb January 6 2007, 04:31:02 UTC

Hel-lo! Gotta love some r/t smut. Good job!