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Jul 16, 2006 11:12

Title: All The Little Things
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prompt 15, emoonstone, prompt 20, prompt 29, prompt 24, prompt 28

Comments 6

wildmagelet July 16 2006, 10:26:38 UTC

Beautifully written. The last two lines pack a powerful punch!

emoonstone July 17 2006, 09:37:52 UTC

Thank you very much.

iamweebles July 16 2006, 16:33:27 UTC

This is so sadly written - I like how you turn mundane details into a slow, sad ramble of Remus' thoughts - you can really feel the melancholy in the whole piece.

iamweebles July 16 2006, 16:51:25 UTC

Oops, sorry, forgot to mention that I saw a typo: she never seemed to loose anything should be lose sorry to be nitpicky - that's just one of those typos that always trips me up when I see it.

emoonstone July 17 2006, 09:42:46 UTC

Oh corrected that mistake, thanks for pointing it out. Thank you for the review as well, this piece sort of evolved from what I had originally intended to write and so wasn't entirely convinced it worked but glad it did for you!

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emoonstone July 17 2006, 16:31:57 UTC

Thank you very much my dear. Your views mean more than you can imagine. You've also got a real style, I've particularly noticed it this ficathon and it is so beautiful. Thanks for the nitpick as well, all corrected now.