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Just An Ordinary Week: Friday

Jul 10, 2006 21:08

Title: Just An Ordinary Week: Friday

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prompt 22, bratty_jedi

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mrstater July 11 2006, 02:07:10 UTC

I really love Remus' charm in anticipation of Tonks doing something like walk into the living room undressed. :)

bratty_jedi July 11 2006, 02:11:28 UTC

When I needed to get her out of the way so evryone could come in, I decided to throw her in the bath since I mentioned that in the previous piece. From there I realized I had the big problem of Tonks' not being dressed. Remus came up with the charm idea for me. I'm not really sure where it came from but it solved my problem. Glad you liked it.

iamweebles July 11 2006, 02:47:39 UTC

This is without a doubt my favorite piece in the series. There's something about Remus in this - he's more self-assured in this one, it's hard to put my finger on exactly why he comes across that way in this piece - perhaps it's the way you have him hanging back and quirking an eyebrow at her, or maybe it's that he's confident enough to be a little silly without being broad about it, but it's dead sexy.

bratty_jedi July 11 2006, 12:44:42 UTC

Thanks. Poor Remus has been worried to death for most of this series with everything that happened to Tonks. It has always seemed to me that guys are at the worst when something is wrong with the woman they love and they ca't do anything to help. Has something to do with wanting to protect her and being powerless. Throwing the party was kind of a catharsis for him, I think, in that it was something he could actually do.

majorcarter_sg1 July 11 2006, 05:09:56 UTC

Oh this was great. a nice little get together after the hospital stuff. I loved Remus in this one. I'll agree that it was dead sexy. and that line about the view being his was dead sexy by it's self. I enjoyed the whole little series.
-Sam

bratty_jedi July 11 2006, 12:46:23 UTC

Thanks. I had it in my mind for him to explain the charm and make that comment and then it somehow got left out of first draft. Since that seemes to be a favorite part of this one, I'm glad I caught it and added it back in.

Thanks so much for reading and commenting on the entire series! Glad you liked it.

hplilypotter July 11 2006, 09:45:21 UTC

Nice series! So seems so in character for Remus to think of a charm like that.

bratty_jedi July 11 2006, 12:49:31 UTC

Thanks. He always seems so calm and able to solve almost any problem. And most of the time, his solutions have a bit of a Marauder twist which is why I absolutely love the man!