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[jadeddiva]

Title:For the Sake of Momentum
Author: jadeddiva
Format & Word Count: Ficlet, 1028 words
Rating: R for sexual stuff
Prompt: 23. delicious
Summary: During HBP. Remus stops by Tonks’ flat during one of his Order check-ins.
Author’s Note: I was supposed to be not reading Doctor Who fic and writing my thesis proposal. I wrote smut instead. Concrit

Comments

[joely_jo]

Okay. Now I'm feeling better. Cheers, my dear! :)

Best line? 'I make you dinner then you come home and shag me senseless. Even exchange of energy.' LOL. *adds to mental list of great one-liners to quote in future*

[jadeddiva]

I am the girlfriend of a physicist - I know these things ;)

[purebristles]

"I make dinner then you come home and shag me senseless. Even exchange of energy." BEST LINE!

[jadeddiva]

Thanks for reading - I really enjoyed writing this story and having at least some feedback makes me feel better :)

[freakinwinky]

I agree that we may have more icon material in that line. Once again lovely little smutty piece with just the tiniest bit of angst. Great work!

[jadeddiva]

I love this story but I don't think anyone else does :( save for that line. Thanks for reading - seriously, you made me feel much better.

[iamweebles]

Oh my goodness, I love this story! It's so sad and yet hopeful and of course, incredibly erotic. Yes, it has that great line about energy exchange, but it also has the little asides that just make my heart turn over, like how he hopes he's not undressing her for the last time, and how things have changed that they can resist each other for a few hours - it's just got a lovely bittersweet cadence to the whole sexual dance between them.

[jadeddiva]

Thanks! I actually like Remus' 'Hmm, Physics' line afterwards better than the exchange of energy line but oh well...thanks for this lovely review.