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Prompt #2

Apr 01, 2006 22:20

Title: Jettison
Author: jadeddiva
Format & Word Count: Drabble, 186 words
Rating: PG-ish
Prompt: #2. “If we had no winter, the spring would not be so pleasant; if we did not sometimes taste of adversity, prosperity would not be so welcome.” ~ Anne Bradstreet
Summary: She calms herself with material comforts that cannot compare to his smile.
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jadeddiva, prompt 2

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a_t_rain April 2 2006, 03:29:15 UTC

Aww. A lovely little moment. HBP-era, I assume?

jadeddiva April 2 2006, 03:30:42 UTC

Yep - I was hoping the Hogsmeade patrolling would be enough of a prompt for that. Does it work reasonably well? I'm so burnt out from life that I'm not sure anymore.

basketkiwi April 2 2006, 03:31:22 UTC

Oh! This WAS quite angsty, but not overly so. Interesting idea as well, though more than a bit heart-wrenching! Still, the last sentence was just the opposite! Wonderful drabble! :]

jadeddiva April 2 2006, 12:34:26 UTC

Thanks!

sparkly_stuff April 2 2006, 04:02:01 UTC

Awwww. ♥

I'll make a fluff writer out of you yet. Just you wait. ;)

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sparkly_stuff April 2 2006, 05:55:00 UTC

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jadeddiva April 2 2006, 12:32:27 UTC

OMG ME SO FAMOUS!

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gloryforever April 2 2006, 06:21:43 UTC

Awww. That last line there ("it's not cold, not anymore") just blew me away.

jadeddiva April 2 2006, 12:34:14 UTC

Thanks!

Also, are you the person that I don't know that friended me on MSN?

joely_jo April 2 2006, 09:08:56 UTC

Very cute. And the image of spring is very powerful... a metaphor, perhaps? :)

jadeddiva April 2 2006, 12:33:52 UTC

Maybe...;) Thanks for commenting!