Prompt #1

[everknowledge]

Title: pink cakes and potions
Author: everknowledge
Format & Word Count: Drabble 299
Rating: G
Prompt: Prompt #1
Warning: Oh the fluff! It’s covered in frosting too!
Summary: Tonks helps Remus after a transformation.

Comments

[mrstater]

He thinks to himself that he may never fully deserve her, but he also knows in his heart this is where he is meant to be.

And that's just the right kind of humility right there. I love this mature stage of their relationship. Well done. (In a different sense than Tonks' chocolate cake -- which, by the way, is so cute and so her and so Remus to eat it anyway.)

[everknowledge]

Thank you, I too love the mature stage of the relationship and exploring the idea of them together long-term.

[vnfan]

I like Remus and Tonks fics that show them in their daily routine, living out the love they share. You know, there is a lot to be said for not feeling that you deserve the one you're with. It is good to be grateful. This was really sweet (like the best frosting always is)!

[everknowledge]

Thank you!

[iamweebles]

Very nice! The little touches (the frosted burnt cake, his acceptance at the end) hit the characterizations perfectly.

[everknowledge]

Thanks so much!

[joely_jo]

Very good... The burnt cake was a clever idea - I always envisaged Tonks being a bit of a disaster in the kitchen. Well done!

[everknowledge]

Thank you. I've thought the same thing about her cooking, but then I also like to think that over time Remus rubs off on her.

[basketkiwi]

Oh! This was really well done! I loved the (BURNT AND HEART-SHAPED!!) cake and the look she gave him when he woke up. It seemed very intamite, too, that they trust each other to see each other when they're vulnerable and all. And the last line was perfect for the fic and prompt and everything! n.n

[everknowledge]

Thank You so much!