Week 12: Barrel of Monkeys

[rswndrlst]

Sounds Like A Punk Band

I’d been sleeping on Adam and Becky’s couch for about a month when they invited me to Music and Mayhem an annual three day free punk-rock music festival that was invitation only. The exact location is always a secret until only days before the event. Meaning you could only get there if you knew someone else who knew how to

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[bleodswean]

I really enjoyed this. And would read a novella-length version of punky adventures! Which would, of course, include more introspection and self-growth intermixed with funtimes!

Nice interp of the prompt, too!

[jem0000000]

This is lovely. :)

Concrit-wise, you could use a few more commas, and the pic's alt text is missing a space, but I don't see anything major. And I didn't really notice the lack of commas while I was reading. :)

[rswndrlst]

My never ending battle with commas continues :p That's what I get for favoring run on sentences.

You know I realized I forgot to add text for the picture and wasn't sure I should edit it after the deadline. I will add one and remember it if I ever use any pictures again.

Thanks so much for the feedback!!

[jem0000000]

Lol! I think commas are fighting a losing action against like two-thirds of all writers. :)

Hmm, it must have done it automatically -- the alt text (the text associated with the image internally) reads "pbrflowers 2". Flickr sometimes does that for me, IIRC, so it might be your hosting site. *shrug*

You're welcome! :)

[eternal_ot]

Ah! Glad to see you back..:) And loved this jam-session, the camaraderie came out quite well in this piece..:) A nice read!

[i_17bingo]

There is a certain delerium in this piece--the kind that comes from unrelenting celebrations of life as these kinds of music festivals. You captured this perfectly, and brought on me a wash of nostalgia.

[halfshellvenus]

This put me right in the moment of something I've never done, and made me see why other people would enjoy it!