LJ Idol 10: Week 16: Thunderclap

[rswndrlst]

Cue Thunder

“I have had a vision mistress that Sir Henry will be lost at sea,” says the young actress crossing to the proscenium.

In the small box on stage left a small towheaded boy watches through a peephole as the drawing room of a town house begins transforming into a scene of the open ocean; a back drop painted to look like a churning sea with

Comments

[eternal_ot]

Oh!This is wonderful and informative. I really like what you did here. A sweet love story :)

[adoptedwriter]

Dialogue in this is great in that it moves the story along at a nice pace.

[bewize]

Good job. And a good lesson for all.

[roina_arwen]

This was very sweet!