LJ Idol 10: Week 11: The Blue Hour

[rswndrlst]

Alive and Well in The Sunshine State

The smell of the breeze through the open windows
The fading light being swallowed by the darkness
The the hum of the highway
The susurrus of swaying palms
Brings me outside
It’s still too bright for the street lamps, casting a cozy orange glow on the atmosphere
The honeyed shadows of the golden hour
Fading to blue
And

Comments

[lolaslaughter]

This is absolutely beautiful!! You are so strong, amazing and just wonderful!! You have always been one hell of a fighter!! It's one (among so many) of favorite things about you!! ❤❤

[bleodswean]

Wow!!! Excellent visuals here! This line is stellar - Florida
You are trying to seduce me
With your sunsets!! I hope to see more poetry from you!

[messygorgeous]

I have family in Florida. You described the twilight there so well! And susurrus is one of my favorite words, grin!

I hope Florida brings you the healing that you seek.

[rayaso]

I loved the imagery, especially "susurrus of swaying palms" You also did a great job with the ending.

[halfshellvenus]

I really liked this, the sense of homesickness and of beauty in all the places you've found it, and the ending in which the current place is not quite right but you will prevail anyway because you refuse not to.

You are trying to seduce me
With your sunsets

Very nice. :)