LJ Idol 10: Week 6: Heel-Turn

[rswndrlst]

The Few Will Become Many

To save the people of Earth, The Few must join as one.
The Final City will rise from the ashes of the old world.
All among the few who have survived The Final War and swear allegiance to The Final City will be become a part of the whole and reside in adherence to the Law of Conformity.
This is the Final Great Act of

Comments

[bleodswean]

What a wild ride this entry was! You grabbed me by the throat and didn't let go until the very end...and what a wonderful twist, but still...so much angst! Really well done dystopian piece. You packed a ton of story into a short piece. Great work!

[rswndrlst]

Thank you so much! I enjoyed creating this world so it makes me silly happy to hear that it hit the mark, I'm especially excited because I've really enjoyed your entries this season!

[dmousey]

Please tell me there will be more in this world! I really enjoyed this and would love to sink my teeth in! Hugs and peace~~~

[rswndrlst]

Aww thank you! There were a few details that I decided to leave out so it's not impossible that I might revisit these characters. Thanks for the encouragement!

:Hugs back:

[my_name_is_jenn]

I love the twist at the end. I love how you used a dystopian future as take on the prompt. Well done.

[rswndrlst]

Thank you!

[penpusher]

A captivating bit of dystopian lore... it feels all too real.

[rswndrlst]

ha nice userpic! I am a bit of weird dystopia geek so I'm glad to hear it works, thanks!

[uselesstinrelic]

I can sometimes get overwhelmed reading long pieces, but yours kept me going to find out what happened. I love me a good revolution. :3 I hope she gives him hell! The whole lot of them!

[rswndrlst]

I really appreciate this comment I was worried about posting something so long but something about this just struck a personal cord with me and I had to go with it! Long live the revolution indeed :D