LJ Idol 10: Week 4: “I don't skate to where the puck is. I skate to where the puck is going to be."

Jan 06, 2017 14:13


This Is Only A Test

San Francisco, CA
Outer Richmond District
Tuesday, August 2nd
11:24 AM

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rayaso January 8 2017, 00:30:47 UTC
This was a wonderful look at life at the cafe melded with a little hockey silliness. It was a great use of the prompt. Is this based on personal experience?

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rswndrlst January 8 2017, 22:02:00 UTC

It is actually! I worked at a really small cafe in SF but in a place that wasn't always busy so we would come up with creative ways to goof off, not usually full contact sports inside the cafe but we could get pretty rowdy when we went out together after work

Thanks for reading!

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j0ydivided January 8 2017, 01:27:19 UTC
I really enjoyed this. :)

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rswndrlst January 8 2017, 22:02:32 UTC

Yay! Thanks!

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kajel January 8 2017, 01:49:17 UTC
Well, that was an unexpected surprise! I enjoyed reading this.

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rswndrlst January 8 2017, 22:22:42 UTC

Yessss! :pumps fist: This was fun to write but I really had to strive for brevity and still worry it's too long because it's almost boring until it's not

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marlawentmad January 9 2017, 00:06:28 UTC

Delightful use of the prompt!

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rswndrlst January 10 2017, 17:41:10 UTC
Yay! thank you!

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bleodswean January 9 2017, 16:41:37 UTC
EXCELLENT!!! You really had control over this and your dialogue was perfect!

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rswndrlst January 9 2017, 22:42:26 UTC

Thank you so much!!

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