Comments | rswll108: Intermediate Clandestine Affairs and Intro to Early Childhood Development (4/?)

rswll108

Intermediate Clandestine Affairs and Intro to Early Childhood Development (4/?)

May 17, 2011 00:37

Hello again! I am very excited to present you with this chapter, because I know a lot of commenters were looking for the group scene. Here is the second part of that reveal, and I hope you like it. This is by no means the end, and I'm hoping to update more now, because the group scene was what I was really struggling with. I really wanted to do ( Read more... )

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Comments 21

rozicanuti May 17 2011, 05:09:05 UTC

I loved it!! It was Perfectly in character! LMAO Troy!!
Awww Jeff asid he lived her in front of everyone. And Britta and Jeff had their closure. Can't wait to see what's next!

rswll108 May 21 2011, 04:48:31 UTC

Thanks! I'm really glad that you liked it :-). I'm trying to better about updating, so the next chapter is up!

!! anonymous May 17 2011, 06:54:49 UTC

Confessions: I got so excited when I saw this new post and I grinned like an idiot throughout most of the story. Very aww-able. You're a pretty kick-ass writer... so keep 'em coming!

Re: !! rswll108 May 21 2011, 04:49:10 UTC

Aww, thanks :-) Your comments are always inspiring. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter!

shopgirl909 May 17 2011, 09:34:52 UTC

WOW. Wow. Wow.

This was made with awesome, baked with awesome, then frosted with awesome.

I really want more details about Jeff/Annie's meeting of the parents and their history, so I hope we hear more about that in the chapters to come.

I am looking forward to more and I know that if you do update regularly, this summer hiatus really will go quickly.

rswll108 May 21 2011, 04:50:20 UTC

Haha, I have to tell you this may be the best comment I've ever gotten. And I may use the whole baked with awesome thing in my daily life, TM shopgirl909. I'm really glad you liked this chapter. As I think you will see in my new chapter, I'm kind of doing callbacks to the history of their relationship slowly, so I hope that it's what you're looking for!

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rswll108 May 21 2011, 04:51:48 UTC

Thanks! The toughest part for me was trying to figure out how each character would react, so I really appreciate know that people thought it seemed in character. Sometimes I get carried away with how I want them to act instead of how they would actually act. Glad you enjoyed the chapter and hope you keep on reading!

halflegendary May 17 2011, 21:49:43 UTC

I first read this story on fanfiction.net, which is were I ended up finding Milday/Milord (thank goodness!) and I can't tell you how happy I am to have new chapters.

I second the above comment, where upon seeing that you had updated I smiled.

One little thing, though: "As a group, I really thing we just need to start trusting each other."

It should be "I really THINK," right?

Yeesh, all I need now is a new chapter from Supercapo, with this being updated and Elsie Snuffin's new story. Seventh heaven.

Whoops rswll108 May 17 2011, 21:58:01 UTC

Yes, that is a typo. You'd think I would catch these things as a journalist and all. Glad you enjoyed it, though! I am a huge fan of supercapo and elsiesnuffin, so it means a lot that you even mentioned them in the same breath as me. Can't wait for you all to see what I have next!