FIC: WATER'S EDGE FOR BRIGHTY18

[sambethe]

Title: Water's Edge
Author: sambethe
Recipient: brighty18
Rating: G
Word count: 250
Summary: Last day of vacation. Sirius is not quite ready to say goodbye.
Notes: M, just a little something to say thank you for pinch hitting and being part of our extended smallgifts family. Happy new year!

Comments

[mindabbles]

What a lovely, bittersweet scene! This is so evocative and has so much packed into its 250 words. Beautiful.

[magnetic_pole]

A lovely, sensual scene. Enjoyed! M.

[bearshorty]

In this small scene you conveyed so much. The atmosphere was lovely but so we're the emotions upon Remus' news. Kudos.

[brighty18]

Oh, what a beautiful and unexpected surprise! Thank you!

This was gorgeously written, so lush and sensual (in all the meanings of sensual, too). So small and so beautiful - bijou! And, as it is yet to rise about the single digits here, reading about someplace warm was a real treat!

[secretsolitaire]

Beautiful and bittersweet.