FIC: A GLASS HALF FULL FOR ERISED_RAIN

[pavlablack]

Title: A Glass Half Full
Author/Artist: pavlablack
Recipient: erised_rain
Rating: R
Contents or warnings (highlight to view): * Language, frotting *
Word count: 1700
Summary: Remus is avoiding Tonks, and Sirius is avoiding everyone. Good thing there’s plenty of Firewhiskey on hand.
Notes: For the prompt, “Remus is drunk and, ah, the drink always does bring out

Comments

[erised_rain]

kjhjhgjhgjhguhghjjhjkhkjhkjhhjgjhgjhghjgjh oblivious pups! <3

Ooookay, now something more coherent. I LOVE it! One of my absolutely favourite things in R/S fics (besides the boys being all oblivious and what not) is the post-Azkaban part with a grumpy Sirius who just doesn’t know what to do with himself, hating everything and everything except...well, Remus. Maybe not hating per se, but not knowing how to act around people, hmm…feeling kinda out of place as you said it. And when Remus is the only one who gets him, who is able to put up with him that’s…it’s just special. And that is exactly what you can feel in this fic, in such a perfect way.

“I thought you wanted to be alone.”
“I can be alone with you here.”Ah, so true, isn’t it? *makes incoherent noises again

[erised_rain]

I'm so happy you liked it! The "I like you" line by Remus was one of the first things that popped in my head when I thought about writing this fic, so I'm glad it struck a chord with you. And writing the boys being oblivious and a drunk, uninhibited Remus was fun, so thanks for your lovely prompt. Merry Christmas!

[pavlablack]

Sorry, that was me above--forgot to log in!

[erised_rain]

For Circe's sake! :D

Haha I love that! (:

[mindabbles]

Ooooh, lovely, lovely, lovely. Just sweet enough, just sexy enough, just angsty enough. Loved their dialogue and Sirius' internal dialogue. So happy to see them together in such a delightful, swoony way!

[pavlablack]

Thanks for the lovely comment! I'm glad you liked the balance.

[mustntgetmy]

This is fantastic! You did a really great job of conveying both Remus and Sirius just through their dialogue, and of making the fic a perfect blend of angsty and sweet. Also, now you've got me wishing that they'd said "for Circe's sake" in the books. Wonderful fic :)

[pavlablack]

Thank you so much! Angst I can do, but sweet is harder for me, so I'm glad you thought it worked. And I thought for sure I'd heard "for Circe's sake" before, but maybe that was in a fanfic somewhere : )

[flaminia_x]

oohh, yum. That was delicious! Sweet and hot and so full of promise and I just wanted it to keep going.

[pavlablack]

Thank you! What a lovely compliment.

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