Long Not for the Dawn for krabapple

Jan 01, 2007 15:15

Title: Long Not for the Dawn
Author: thistlerose
Written for: krabapple
Rating: R
Summary: After everyone else has gone to bed, Sirius and Remus have a private gift exchange.
A/N: So many thank yous to my wonderful beta readers, mellafe and semielliptical. I know it's a little after the fact, but I hope you had a wonderful holiday, krabapple. *snuggle*

The jacks have dirty mouths. )

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solemnly_swear1 January 2 2007, 22:24:33 UTC
"You're pretty." This line killed me, then fixed me with the superglue of love. I loved the whole thing, but I loved it twice as much after reading that one line!

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thistlerose January 3 2007, 00:52:46 UTC
Thank you so much! *g*

Sirius will always be pretty to Remus.

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secretsolitaire January 3 2007, 00:10:43 UTC
Wonderful. You are so good at their gentle banter! And somehow you managed to make the sex hot with just a few lines. *sighs happily*

"Is someone having sex? I swear, it sounds like sex-"

Hee! The jacks were a great touch.

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thistlerose January 3 2007, 00:53:18 UTC
*g* Banter is my favorite thing to write. Thank you so much!

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musesfool January 3 2007, 00:14:41 UTC
Oh, lovely. Sigh.

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thistlerose January 3 2007, 00:53:33 UTC
Thank you! :)

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madeline871 January 3 2007, 01:13:30 UTC
I was so excited to see fic from you, it's always so nicely written.

The naughty jacks got me too.

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thistlerose January 4 2007, 02:47:30 UTC
Aww, thank you! I'm glad you liked this one. :)

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mustntgetmy January 3 2007, 02:49:23 UTC
Oh, wow, this is really impressive. I loved every inch of this fic, but I liked the insulting jacks and the way you describe Sirius feeling trapped inside the house the most. The second was particularly fantastic. An excellent piece of writing.

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thistlerose January 4 2007, 02:48:44 UTC
Thank you so much! :)

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