Day 13 - Fic: Team AU: Lost to You Yourself

Oct 13, 2010 14:16

Team: AU
Title: Lost to You Yourself
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Nothing, really, maybe a little bit of plottiness?
Genre(s): Romance
Word Count: ~8,390
Summary: Sirius Black writes gay porn for a skin mag, and meets Remus Lupin, who does professional readings (audio recordings) of his fictions, and there is flirting, and courting, and love over ( Read more... )

team au, rs_games 2010, fic

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elessae November 18 2010, 06:13:45 UTC
Thank you! And yayness for sexy!

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ceredwensirius October 14 2010, 02:19:50 UTC
Your prose is utterly brilliant. I loved every minute of reading this and the end! Guh! Very sexy! Great job!

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elessae November 18 2010, 06:15:31 UTC
Thank you - that the fic held you till the end is high praise indeed. And thank you also for your excellent captaincy of Team AU! I haven't been as active as I would have liked in this year's games, but everytime I check in, you are always rallying troops for recommendations and reviews - it is amazing, so thank you so much. ♥

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kingzgurl October 14 2010, 03:11:26 UTC
YOU ENDED IT THERE?!?!?!? *pouts most ridiculously*

I love the way you took this and wove such a wonderfully sensual story throughout Sirius' thoughts, the story he wrote, Remus' words and their first meeting.

I only wish you'd have given us the first date and their first night together :)

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elessae November 18 2010, 06:16:47 UTC
Hahaha, I have all these semi-porny outtakes planned, but I probably will never find the time to get to writing them. Having said that, thank you for liking the fic, and wanting to read about their first date and night!

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deathjunke October 14 2010, 04:16:46 UTC
I haven't finished reading yet but i had to stop and tell you that you are totally fucking brilliant. HARD that is like a bagillion times more extreme than swish and flick or any other imaginary smutty mag and i love you for it ♥

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deathjunke October 14 2010, 04:29:11 UTC
This was so good! You are very creative mystery author. i adore what you did with the words in this story: a sheep in wolfs clothing, words beaten into sexy submission ♥, and everything had a great rhythm to it.

I also LOVE the tile of the Mag (HARD! ;D), and find myself agreeing with Sirius (I think) smut is all good well and fantastic but sometimes the sensual aspect of a story is what really makes it golden ♥

This was lovely ^-^

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elessae November 18 2010, 06:18:59 UTC
Thank you also for noticing the small bits with the words - I had a mad time writing them, and I am glad you like them as much as I secretly do!

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elessae November 18 2010, 06:17:55 UTC
GUH. My first ever mid-fic comment. I feel so ... changed.

*wide eyes*

Thank you, dear. ♥ ♥

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falling_voices October 14 2010, 09:57:18 UTC
... oh.

That was quite gorgeous - your style is very compelling and attractive, elaborate without being too sophisticated, and the way they just seem to sweep into each other's life feels realistic and heartwarming. You did a really wonderful job with this. ... does it fit that I want to podfic this now?

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inverts October 16 2010, 23:07:24 UTC
Do it!

well, I mean, presuming that mystery author is all right with that and all.

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elessae November 18 2010, 06:21:30 UTC
Oh, mystery author is more than all right!

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werewolfsfan October 22 2010, 03:29:37 UTC
OMGawd! I've been contemplating how we need more Remus/Sirius fics pod cast and wondering how to go about getting that done!

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