Day 26 - Fic: Team Place: The Sweater

[rsgamesmods]

Team: Place

Title: The Sweater

Rating: T

Warnings: Some rude language and mention of sex, but that's about it

Genres: Fluff and Humor

Word Count: 1700

Summary: Sirius bought Remus a sweater for his birthday. Remus hasn't taken it off since. James thinks it's unhealthy to wear clothes for that long.

Notes: Thank you to the wonderful Wasp

Comments

[museinabsentia]

Well, this was adorable. I love a worried James. And the bit with Sirius not talking was so very cute.

And this:
“Mama James. I’m surprised your Animagus form isn’t a fucking chicken.”
That's just a great line. Really says a lot about all of them.

Fun read! Nice job.

[abyss_valkyrie]

Oh god.Mmmf was possibly the best response I've actually seen in a fic,how did you get so creative with that?I could practically read Sirius' answers in his 'mfff's! I just love how James reacts to the situation and Remus and Sirius acting like it's completely normal to wear the same sweater for days. O_o

Great chemistry between the characters,I particularly like that part about Peter and his dexterity! Hahahaa!

[bookgrrrl2006]

that was super adorable and super hilarious. it just made me smile and smile. i loved the banter and witty dialog, but on. my. gosh. the actual description of that sweater was just hilarious. james was a hoot, too.

what a truly cute story! thank you, mystery author.

[sub_etheric]

Well that was really cute and also had me giggling! The conversations between the Marauders had such a lovely, natural feel about them here - especially James and Sirius. The thought of James dreaming up romantic tales about his best friends as the only way to deal with Sirius' pining is hilarious!

[mommyconk]

Very cute and I loved the mmf and urgh answers