Day 19 - Fic: Team Time: One Hundred Lifetimes (Until We Get it Right)

[rsgamesmods]

Team: Time

Title: One Hundred Lifetimes (Until We Get it Right)

Rating: PG

Warnings: None

Word Count: 5000

Summary: Rumour has it that there are those who're linked to another person. No matter what time and no matter what universe they’re in, they will recognise each other. Somehow, their hearts will know. ~ A parallel universe story.

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Comments

[xylophonex]

Every part of this is wellwritten and beautiful but what really does it for me is Remus's voice in between. That was fabulous! Lovely on every level.

[huldrejenta]

Thank youuuu!! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this!

[bookgrrrl2006]

oh. my. dear. gawd. this was amazing. not only was it quite gorgeously written, but it was utterly compelling. each new section, or each new life, i suppose was equally fascinating and i would have gladly read a 30,000 word story about each and every one of them. but what really made this was the idea of connection throughout realities and lifetimes and dimensions. it was like that movie the could atlas but without the weird, asian make-up. in fact, it was better than that movie because it was all about sirius and remus.

i am guessing that you are a philosopher, yourself, mystery author, and i am very impressed at the way you translate your own knowledge into fiction. your are also clearly a very very talented writer and i would love to read any original stuff you write, too. not that this wasn't utterly original. you know what i mean.

[huldrejenta]

Thank you for such a beautiful and thoughtful comment! I felt rather uncertain about this fic, so comments like these really do mean a lot <3

I wouldn't say I'm a philosopher as such, more a dreamer, maybe? Though the two can be related, I suppose.
Thanks again!

[abyss_valkyrie]

Oh sweetness!!!This story melted me with its goodness and utter perfect writing. The language is just beautiful, the feelings here,myyyy, I'm really feeling a little content myself just reading this. I loved your mix of the various worlds and timelines, especially the bit of Remus' words at the start of every part. Very very Remus-y and so pretty! :) Their relationship at every point is so well written, the post-Azkaban one with their differences and reunion, the last part(the best one!!), the one with Remus suspicious of Sirius and all of it-such a beautiful work!! <3

[huldrejenta]

Thank you so very much!! Comments like these mean a lot, and I'm so happy you enjoyed this little story <3
I also feel the last one is the best one, or at least it's the one universe I most like to see them in :)

[museinabsentia]

This was incredible. I would have read an entire story of any of those fragments of different universes. They were all so well thought out, and perfect for these two. Not always happy, not always not, but always very much them. I love how you worked canon in there, just as one more possibility. And the ending, where they get to grow old together! That made me smile, a lot. This was just wonderful. Lovely job.

[huldrejenta]

Thank you so much! I wasn't at all certain about this fic, if it would work, so I'm thrilled that you enjoyed! Thank you for your thoughtful comment <3

[sub_etheric]

The sense of hope throughout this is lovely, that faith that despite the challenges of their current situation there will always be another lighter path to come. Remus' voice also came across really well.

"Words flow easily between the two of them, like a tennis match no one is particularly interested in winning, fully satisfied with picking up each other’s serve, creating interesting twists and turns before sending the ball back again." What a perfect line, it sums up everything about the joy in their interactions that I love.

[huldrejenta]

Thank you so much for Your lovely and thoughtful comment! I'm so glad that you enjoyed! <3