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Day 18 - Fic: Team Time: The Time We Have

Oct 26, 2016 14:04

Team: Time

Title: The Time We Have

Rating: PG-13

Warnings: None

Word Count: 1600

Summary: Sirius and Remus are about to move in together, but the incertitude of war gives Remus doubts.

Notes: Many thanks to my beta SS.

Prompt: #54 - "Life isn't about waiting for the right time to come. It's all about doing all the right things in the time that is ( Read more... )

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Comments 6

bookgrrrl2006 October 26 2016, 21:56:38 UTC

this was darling and funny and lovely, not to mention an utterly perfect use of the prompt. from that first fabulous line to the super sweet ending, you had me entranced. i feel for remus here, too. i totally empathized with his emotions.

well done!

abyss_valkyrie November 1 2016, 13:06:41 UTC

Aaahhh!!What a sweet little moment in time. I like how you used your prompt here, very apt. Both of the boys' characters really showed here, I totally applaud you for writing them so in character. The slight worries mixed with the humorous style really gave this fic a good atmosphere-you can see how they are young and are being forced to face reality as it is for them. Seeing Sirius all serious (did I really just write that?) even though he acts all funny and cute, loved that!!!

museinabsentia November 1 2016, 13:37:49 UTC

Oh, I love this. All the uncertainty of moving in together, of the war. And I loved how Remus' reason for being unsure was exactly the same reason Sirius asked in the first place. How this was his subtle way of clinging to Remus and having that bit of light when everything wasn't going wrong around them. So sweet. Just a lovely little story.

sub_etheric November 5 2016, 21:37:34 UTC

This had a great feeling of seizing the day about it, and Sirius' speech to convince Remus in the end was lovely. Remus' winding streams of thought and Sirius being sure he'll keep his lustrous head of hair also seemed just right!

huldrejenta November 16 2016, 11:08:50 UTC

Oh, what a lovely and bittersweet story. I love Sirius' "live in the moment" attitude in contrast to Remus' concerns, it seems very fitting, and it vividly shows us challenges of living in wartime. Love the humour as well. Great job!