Team: Post-Hogwarts Title: Let go Rating: G Warnings: none Notes: Note to self: stop leaving everything to literally the last minute Prompt: 29 - rainy view of London
I love how quiet this is: their conversation, the background, and the little things they do work so well to give us that atmosphere of anger and restlessness at the start (coming from Sirius), and then Remus comes along to talk to Sirius and the open windows at the end... ah, the symbolisms! I love this. <3
I adore the way you've drawn the houses and the rain, it creates the perfect background for underlining Sirius' mood. I love all the expressions on their faces, all the small details that make them so real. They are both perfectly in character, and I really love the ending. Wonderful!
I don't really have words for how sad and sort of empty your comic made me feel. The tension and the quiet mood of the rain was so palapable. Beautifully done!
Whooo!I do love the expressions!you got those so perfectly!the way you used the prompt was great!keeping it canon and using your own sentences!love the powerful words!and the rain and greyness somehow go well together,somehow makes them seem like the only people in the world,sort of closed away in their own little world!sweet ending too! <3
that one was a bit like a punch to the stomach, sirius' frustrations and remus' taking them like, well, punches. love the hopeful ending. <3 also i don't know if it was intentional, but i like that the background wasn't white, but this warm reddish shade, it contrasts very nicely with the coldness from the rain and snow outside the window. love it. ♥
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I love all the expressions on their faces, all the small details that make them so real. They are both perfectly in character, and I really love the ending.
Wonderful!
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