Day 24 - Team Sirius - Fic: Romantic Opportunities and Near-Death Experiences

[rsgamesmods]

Team: Sirius
Title: Romantic Opportunities and Near-Death Experiences
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: There's some sex.
Word Count: 8,400
Summary: Wealthy purebloods are being robbed and Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot, Prongs, and Lily are sent to find out why. In the meantime, Sirius recently saw something he can't get out of his head, which turns out to be a

Comments

Team Sirius

[queenkerosene]

Ah! This is so delightful. (Really, I love stories that manage to blend a really awesome plot with some really awesome smut, haha.) But this was a really great use of this prompt -- loved having the interactions with all the Marauders and Lily. The banter was just wonderful. Sirius' emotion throughout this all was so great. I really like how obsessive he is, and Remus' comment about him thinking the idea is from him was just a particularly great line to me.

Thank you for writing this! It was a lot of fun.

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[mindabbles]

Thank you so much!! So glad you thought both the plot and smut were awesome (also my favorite combo...) I loved the prompt. What fun it was to think about how to use it. Thank you for the lovely comment!

TEAM SIRIUS

[rewrites24]

SMUTSMUTSMUT!!! My inner pervert find the lack of smut thus far in the games disturbing. Thanks for fixing that little problem. Leave it to Team Sirius ;D

I'm so happy someone used the Robin Hood prompt and this was such a great interpretation of it! I loved your Remus, he was such a little bad ass. And I love these sorts of fics where they're like "need you NOW!!!" and the love and desire was balanced so sweetly.

James rules in this fic too.

Really enjoyed it!

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[p_for_polkadots]

SMUTSMUTSMUT!!! My inner pervert find the lack of smut thus far in the games disturbing. Thanks for fixing that little problem.

Ditto. :)

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[mindabbles]

LOL!!! Most happy to oblige. :D

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[mindabbles]

Heh. I can usually be counted upon to lower the tone. ;) They do lend themselves to smut, I think. So, yay. Thank you!

I loved the prompt as well and had more of rollicking thing in my head, but am really pleased you enjoyed this. Thank you so much for the wonderful comment!!!

[lizzy0308]

Awesome fic. And they all lived happily ever after I even liked Pete I'm glad he was a team player here it was really well written Well done

[mindabbles]

Thank you very much! Why, of course they all lived happily ever after. Didn't I mention that the future of this is an AU? ;) I'm glad you liked Peter. I figure, he has to be there. He was their friend, whatever happened later. Thank you!

TEAM REMUS

[pavlablack]

First of all, wonderful use of the prompt-I love how you worked the Weasleys in!

Second, I love how you reveal Sirius's new awareness of Remus, through their physical proximity and how Sirius is so aware of it now after he saw what he saw. I like how you hint at it in the first section to create suspense & flash back to it in the second to create hotness.

Third, funny, engaging, dialogue-I'm just going to quote back a few random lines I loved:

"Dear old Mum," Sirius says. He sits down by the fire, pictures his parents' indignation at being robbed, fury that the Aurors hadn't killed anyone for it immediately, and laughs. "Wonder if the burglars nicked anything that'll kill them anyway."

"It's more of a sweep," Remus says, leaning in. "Less of a swoop."

"They can fucking well see us," Sirius says. In a moment of clarity, he moves back around the tree to Remus and Disillusions him and suddenly he blends into the tree like a chameleon. "Do me," Sirius says and he feels the spell over him like cool water.(Love the double entendre

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[pavlablack]

Oh, and I forgot to say, I love how forward your Remus is!

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[mindabbles]

THANK YOU SO MUCH for this lovely comment!! LOL--techniques to create hotness. That is my new goal in writing. :) I am so happy you liked the dynamics and the dialogue. It was so fun to read back over the bits that you liked with you. Oh, I loved your comment about balancing the different items re: suspense as well. LOL, smut. Glad you liked the smut. :D

[so_jayded]

Loved this! Your interpretation of the prompt was awesome. Mostly what I fell in love with, though, were your characters. I adored Peter, Lily was a treat, and then James went and stole my heart.

And the pups! Sirius, how everything has to be his idea, his odd concept of fun, how he takes back his heirlooms and hands them off. I loved every part of him. Remus with his photographic memory, how he's the voice of reason without being a stick in the mud. Omg, I could go on and on.

I... am apparently in the minority here since I tend to skim over smut, but I did find myself actually reading through it instead of scrolling, so good job there. :)

[mindabbles]

Thank you very much!! I am so thrilled that you liked the characters. :) That is lovely to hear and Awwwww, that you liked James means a lot to me. So happy you liked Sirius and Remus, both. Hee, thank you!