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Day 19 - Fic: Team Remus: Wicked Innocence

Oct 19, 2012 12:18

Team: Remus
Title: Wicked Innocence
Rating: PG
Warnings: The heart strings might get plucked.
Word Count: 1300
Summary: As a boy, Remus Lupin finds the best way to hide from his inevitable future.
Notes: For this being my first RS Games, it was awesome! Thanks to the mods for being patient with me in the beginning and for making my first time ( Read more... )

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Comments 17

bookgrrrl2006 October 19 2012, 20:00:32 UTC

“magic within me, within all of us. i wish this now to come true.”

oh... just... oh! what a delightful combination of canon and au and a perfect, perfect use of the prompt. i also have to say that adore the the fact that you seemed to be inspired by the theme art as well. that's really cool.

this was also perfectly remus and perfectly written. you're a very strong writer, mystery author!

acidbathory November 18 2012, 11:41:20 UTC

Thanks for the lovely comment. I was quite proud of the quote, seeing as I was thinking that was going to be the hardest part to come up with.

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acidbathory November 18 2012, 11:41:46 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

TEAM REMUS themessrs October 20 2012, 23:20:52 UTC

This was such a trip! The whole thing had a dream-like quality to it, and half the time I wasn't sure what was real or fantasy. Excellent embodiment of the prompt!

Re: TEAM REMUS acidbathory November 18 2012, 11:43:30 UTC

Thank you ever so much! Majority of the inspiration for this fic actually came from the movie 'Sucker Punch', so if you've seen that, you'll understand it, too.

TEAM REMUS pavlablack October 21 2012, 02:45:36 UTC

This was really original and intriguing! I like the way you frame the story, and how you incorporate canon events, even though it broke my heart. I especially loved this line: "Don’t you ever leave me, Remus Lupin, ever. I don’t want to lose you, too.” For such a short fic, you really pack in a lot of emotion.

Re: TEAM REMUS acidbathory November 18 2012, 11:44:43 UTC

Thank you so much! I was really proud with how it call came out. I got a majority of the idea from the movie 'Sucker Punch'. And I was quite proud of that line, too.

TEAM SIRIUS rewrites24 October 21 2012, 04:28:21 UTC

That ending packed a punch. Very interesting idea and has a nice dark "fairy tale" vibe.

Re: TEAM SIRIUS acidbathory November 18 2012, 11:46:21 UTC

Thank you so much! The idea for most of this fic came from 'Sucker Punch', so that's how it probably got the dark "fairy tale" vibe to it :)