Day 18 - Art: Team Sirius: Relativity

[rsgamesmods]

Team: Sirius
Title: Relativity
Rating: G
Warnings: Hairy legs, failed shadows.
Summary: I'm trying to bridge them together, but they're too far apart.
Notes: Thanks to N, for the idea.
Prompt: 34 - "Straight rushed into each other's arms

Comments

[nerak_rose]

i was going to say something smart and profound but then i discovered that remus can see up sirius' nightdress and i lost it.

[epithalamium]

This comment, omg. *g*

[nerak_rose]

i've stopped laughing now, i swear. (well, not completely. but i'm focused! focused is good.)

what i noticed (apart from the nightdress) was the size of your panels and then how you reversed them. like, in the first two broad panels we've got the star and the moon and remus' hand and the space he's trying to bridge looks really vast and unbridgeable. but then in the last not-broad panel (lol not-broad i shouldn't words when i've just woken up) where you've got sirius' hand joining his, it looks a lot more snug and even though they didn't bridge the space completely, it now looks like a less consequential thing. as if it doesn't matter so much anymore that a few cm are missing.
also, blinking star! ahh ♥

and sirius' half-asleep and befuddled expression has to be the cutest thing ever. and moony's eyes are huuge whaaat aw he looks like thom ♥

K, BACK TO THE NIGHTDRESS AND THE LOOKING UP OMG

[epithalamium]

Thanks so much! I'm glad you noticed the panel sizes, it was just a small thing--and it really made me feel stupid at times, because I feel like some of the panels need to be larger, but it was following an idea, and I stuck to it because I was too lazy. :S

Sirius's face in the first few panels is my favourite. Probably the only thing I loved from the first time in this whole piece. XD (Hee, Thom!)

I will never see this the same way again. Omg, I don't even know why I missed that! XD

[epithalamium]

Ahaha, thanks so much! (I had to bully my editor to teach me how to make the glowy bits. It was a really wtf moment in front of Photoshop. XD) <3

[mommyconk]

This is so sweet. I love Remus' robe and the look on his face in the last panel. Lovely

[epithalamium]

Thanks so much! (Ngl, I'd steal Remus's robe off his body if I can.)

team sirius

[ithinktsdashing]

I should stop writing comments and just record the sounds I make when viewing your art instead. I'm a quiet person in private, really, but the things you do to me.

First of all, this is such a cute idea for this prompt. And I love how you take such a sweet thing, mix it up with boyish comments ("Excuse me for having girly hands" - "fu") and make it seem so natural and in character.

Second: so many things made of love! Nightshirt, gappy teeth, hairy legs, curly hair, eyelashes, freckles... Good things everywhere. I can't get enough! I keep switching back to look at it and it's still so pretty and it literally glows. I mean, really. Really, the idea to make gifs here was just great.

And thirdly, the way you pace it. The way you use space, angles and panels is simply beautiful. You and your comics, I mean really! <3

I'm sure I had more things to say but that's the only bad thing about this: it's very distracting. I feel really simple, being distracted by pretty glowing things, but hey that's just reality XD Wonderful job.

Re: team sirius

[epithalamium]

Thanks so much! <3 It was really stretching it, drawing this for that prompt, but since when did I ever follow prompts anyway. :P

You know I only find hairy legs when you and Agent N do it! It's all your fault.

[ninasafiri]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww this is beautiful <3

[epithalamium]

Thanks so much! <3