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Day 12 - Team Remus - Fic: The Wicked Cry Alone

Oct 12, 2012 10:50

Team: Remus
Title: The Wicked Cry Alone
Rating: R
Warnings: Some descriptions of violence, witch hunting, sexual situations.
Word Count: ~11,600
Summary: Nestled within the woods lies a long forgotten village that lives in old history. Its myths and tales still ring true to those who have not forgotten how to listen.
Notes: This story is ( Read more... )

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Comments 21

TEAM REMUS shutupeccles October 12 2012, 23:59:48 UTC

Nicely dark AU. I particularly like your opening chapters, the shifting dynamic between the brothers, and the way Remus and Sirius acknowledge the changes in their own relationship.

themessrs December 7 2012, 11:20:17 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it overall. It was fun writing in Regulus, along with the shifting dynamic between the lads later. Thanks for the comment!

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themessrs December 7 2012, 11:20:42 UTC

Thank you, glad you liked it! :]

TEAM REMUS pavlablack October 14 2012, 01:40:19 UTC

This was a really engaging AU. The opening scene, with Remus's parents' deaths, was powerful and disturbing. I really enjoyed his relationship with Tom, and the slow build of Remus's friendship and then romance with Sirius. I also love how persistent Sirius was when Remus tried to isolate himself, and that you gave them a happy ending together, with a cameo from Dumbledore. Nicely done.

themessrs December 7 2012, 11:21:35 UTC

I'm a sucker for happy endings. Thank you so much; I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :]

TEAM SIRIUS rewrites24 October 14 2012, 02:06:55 UTC

Poor Remus! The beginning was so sad but I really enjoyed it. I also liked the evolution of their friendship over the years and the AU world you built. Great job :D

themessrs December 7 2012, 11:22:43 UTC

Awesome, glad you enjoyed it! :]

TEAM SIRIUS dustmouth October 14 2012, 09:55:20 UTC

I really liked this. I have to admit that I was a little apprehensive about reading this since I thought it would be much darker than it is. But I'm glad I did ( ... )

themessrs December 7 2012, 11:25:01 UTC

And I'm really glad you decided to give it a go. Your comments were so wonderful to read, thank you so much. It makes me feel like I've attained my goal in writing this piece: that is, to get the importance of their love across because it's what saved them in the end [that's clearly what happened in the books - shhh].

Regulus just... guh. He's amazing. I couldn't not give him a role, as small as it was. Poor lad deserves more screen/fic time.