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Day 34: Fic: Team Remus: Under a Blue Moon

Nov 03, 2011 11:20

Team: Remus
Title: Under a Blue Moon
Author: only_veetee
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Sexual content.
Word Count: 30,016
Summary: Remus was raised as Fenrir Greyback's son. During the first war, James and Sirius are sent to persuade the werewolves to join their side.
Notes: Thanks to my lovely betas who were ever so patient and helpful.
Prompt: 21 - If you are ( Read more... )

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Comments 17

bearshorty November 3 2011, 18:21:25 UTC

Very thought out AU world. When Remus had to leave Sirius to go back to the pack without either knowing what would happen - that was really hard to read. It was very emotional.

fantasysci5 November 3 2011, 19:41:50 UTC

What a beautiful story, really rouched my heart. I've always loved AU where Remus was raised by Greyback, and this was amazing. And how painful those months were when Remus went back to the pack, and how he had to face his father, being the favorite child...<3 Loved it so much, I believe it's my 2nd favorite Sirius/Remus story ever. <3

starlite_gone November 4 2011, 22:30:15 UTC

Ok you've made me curious-- what's your number one favorite Sirius/Remus story ever?

fantasysci5 November 5 2011, 00:09:45 UTC

haha Glad to make you curious. It was called "Of Brothers and Boyfriends", where James found out about Sirius/Remus, and was pretty homophobic about it. Loved it so much, but this was awesome too!

starlite_gone November 5 2011, 14:28:39 UTC

Aha! Thanks for curing my curiosity ^^

bookgrrrl2006 November 4 2011, 01:49:45 UTC

this was simply outstanding on every level. it is really amazing and i loved it. there was a lot to love too. the dymanics of the relationship seemed very real and very true. I really liked how they came together. it was really cool that they were loyal men and soldiers at the same time. the fact that they had to leave each other broke my heart but made me love them all the more. that is exactly what they should have done. it was like hermione in dh.

their characters were outstanding too. remus felt spot on as did sirius. i really loved his recklessness and devotion. the bit where he was sad about james being a father really rang true for me. james was all he had. but now he has remus.

this was a really amazing story.

iheartremus09 November 4 2011, 05:24:23 UTC

I adore originality in a fanfiction. This was very original. As an author you did an excellent job of creating a world that would be plausible as canon as well as in alternative universes. Every detail including Sirius's personality fit. Both men were brave and yet somehow boyish. The image of running was very powerful and masculine. That worked quite well to enhance their characters and make them real. You are quite a strong writer. This is a very sophisticated story with unique twists and turns. I very much enjoyed reading it.

starlite_gone November 4 2011, 22:23:54 UTC

I loved this! It was well thought out and very interesting to read. I loved the way Sirius and James met Remus, the way everyone acted, the way Sirius and Remus became interested in each other. Everything read so well and fit together so well-- the sex scenes were flawlessly integrated into everything else so that it all felt very natural. I also liked how it referenced several times the pain Remus went through for changing but, being Remus pov, he never thought much about it because he was so used to it ( ... )