Day 32 - Fic: Team Sirius: Hell and Back

[rsgamesmods]

Team: Sirius
Title: Hell and Back
Author: clovermews
Rating: PG
Warnings: None
Word Count: 2137
Summary: There’s a Werewolf Registry, and Remus is on it.
Notes: Thank you to the lovely Miss E. She is the reason for everything.
Prompt: 21 - "If you are going through hell, keep going." - Winston Churchill

Comments

[bearshorty]

Poor Remus. At least he has Sirius to support him. I think you did a fabulous job in looking at levels of discrimination and reactions of people who have to live with it. Sirius, realizing how far back the discrimination goes and how pervasive it is, and Remus, who has to fill out forms and be a number - both were great points and well written ones.

[mypretty_art]

I really need to put together a system of some sort to adequately express my feelings in text. I really really liked this. It was so sweet, and perfect, and really solidifies that part of their friendship that made all the shittiness not-so-shitty. And I loved the "why they love each other" part, eeeeeee! And I thought it was so sweet that Remus reached for his hand. I'm not sure why, but that really struck me. :D

[starstruck1986]

Ohhhhhh this is everything that is so very right about this pairing.

Sweet and tender and then there's that edge from Sirius who wants to rip the face from anyone who hurts his Remus, but knows when to keep from doing that himself.

Beautiful!

[epithalamium]

Awww, Sirius is all mature and supportive, which I love. I mean, obviously he's all pranks and mischief when they were young, but I think he has this soft side to him that only the Marauders know about. So cute!

I think you've captured that horror of werewolf registration perfectly, which so few writers have done, and I'm really glad Remus had Sirius with him through that. <3

And this! “Moony, this isn’t included in the Marauder Code of Manly Behaviour. You’re allowed to be scared.” I don't even. They're just so boyish and sweet, the Marauders trying to support Remus how they can. Guh!

[bookgrrrl2006]

this was outstanding. i really liked how real this felt in terms of what the government does to people. i meant that i liked how you wrote it not that i liked what they did. you wrote it so well. i think stuff like that happens far to often in real life too

i felt really sorry for remus but i was glad sirius was there for him. sirius was really sweet and the perfect boyfriend. he felt very right for cannon too. in cannon he is all about equality and protectiveness and he was here too.

this was really well done. i also really liked what sirius said about not needing veritasium.