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Day 20: Fic: Team Remus: Where the Heart Is

Oct 20, 2011 09:49

Team: Team Remus
Title: Where the Heart Is
Rating: PG
Warnings: Remus was dead: to begin with, Brief and Random Next Gen Shipping
Word Count: 1,629 words
Summary: Teddy moves out, discovers a letter from his father, and comes to a realisation.
Notes: “Are you crazy?” Thank you, G. And to the handful of you who know what I’m talking about, I ( Read more... )

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Comments 39

bookgrrrl2006 October 20 2011, 18:45:28 UTC

this was really beautiful and you actually made me cry. that's pretty rare too. you are a really talented writer and i really liked your use of language here. it was so lush and thick. it was very poetic. teddy was darling and despite the fact that he was the main character we met remus really oozed from every sentence. this story was really about remus and his sense of love and honor. i really loved it. thank you mystery author!

edgewareroad November 17 2011, 08:28:03 UTC

Okay. True story: This comment made me cry when I first read it. I was having a rough day at the time, and you totally made it better. Thank you for your extremely kind words. This really meant a lot to me.

ashley_regret October 21 2011, 01:01:24 UTC

i can't say much except for "perfect"
i usually dont read next gen fics, but i'm really glad i found this one

edgewareroad November 17 2011, 08:28:51 UTC

I'm so glad the next gen worked for you! Thank you!

nishiara_hitomi October 21 2011, 02:34:04 UTC

I actually held back tears with this one. Simply Beautiful.

edgewareroad November 17 2011, 08:29:53 UTC

Thank you so much, and I'm sorry for the angst!

annaskyfox October 21 2011, 16:50:02 UTC

I am not usually a big fan of Teddy stories, for a number of my own reasons, but this was lovely and the first such story that I've read that I really really enjoyed.

edgewareroad November 17 2011, 08:31:08 UTC

Aw. Thank you for giving it a chance in spite of not usually liking Teddy stories. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

iheartremus09 October 22 2011, 18:24:47 UTC

This was lovely. I am not fond of next generation stories but this worked. It worked because it also imbued with a sense of Remus. Your language was poetic and lovely as well.

edgewareroad November 17 2011, 08:32:17 UTC

Thank you so much! I was hoping that sense of Remus would come through, so I really appreciate your comment.